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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
Sounds interesting. So in this story aarti is married to yash because prateek called her bhabi. How does arpita fit in the story? Was she married to yash then died or maybe divorce? Can't wait for the answers to my questions.

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
nice one Rashee !!! like prologue !!

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 12:28am | IP Logged
                              PART-1

It was raining heavily in the  city of Bhopal, Maharashtra.It was raining and the streets were dark..except in one corner there were tents glowing with colorful lights..people were like bees..buzzing around here and there to find shelter..

papa look there look look said arpita in her cute voice.

where beta?? said her father gently

there papa ..look at the big circle..she said pointing to the giant wheel

no no arpita it is for big kids..look there a merry-go-round..

but papa please i want to go to the big circle..

arpita u are getting very stubborn..look at anu ..u both can play in the merry-go-round..said her mother strictly..

not wanting to disobey she agreed..

okay mumma..common anu lets go and play..

anu responded with giggles and threw her arms around arpita..

Arpita and Anu enjoyed their ride so much..they were very happy and hungry so arpita requested her parents to buy them food. 

Arpita insisted her parents to give Anu to her so that she may hold..Her parents were very happy about their daughter's love for her small sisters..they went to buy Pani Puri while arpita sat on the grass..

suddenly Anu started crying ..

Anu why are u crying..asked arpita innocently..

Anu continued to cry..

wait here Anu ..i will call mumma and papa..dont go anywhere..

she left her in the grass as she went to search for her parents...

Anu was left alone..one could say she was scared..she cried and cried wishing for her parents to take her home..

she suddenly stopped crying..

Beta why are u crying..


to be continued..Wink
 
thank u all for liking..this is not new..but my first work which i left incomplete...im just writing it in a new version..and hope i will complete it soon..SmileSmile dont forget to comment




Edited by ksfan2 - 10 April 2013 at 12:54am

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Anu AKA Arthi go missing or got kidnapped...  Is that so

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 3:39am | IP Logged
ooo so is anu aarti I guess ???? someone might find her and name her aarti ?? just guessing aha?

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
nice prologue n cs...
then anu is arti!!!!
anu lost there oe someone kidnapped her...or someone find her!!!
loved it...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 7:35am | IP Logged
waiting for your next part.good work keep writing.

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 12:25am | IP Logged
thank u so much for ur lovely comments..it seems many of u guys are predicting so much..and yeah all of the predictions are partly true..WinkWink im so sorry for not replying ..i dint have much time these days..will try to reply ur comments...

                                   PART - 2

soon Anu started to cry.Nobody noticed her except one couple.they came near her and asked her

Beta why are u crying?? said a lady in her 40's

anu looked at them sadly.the lady got very emotional

Aww..she is so cute..prakash can we take her home? she looks very tired and lost.

Errmm..Priya..dont u think she is errm..lost or something..dont u think we must inform this to police??

we will give a report to the fair manager and take her home.if anyone arrives then we will give her..

Why take her home?? we can give her to the fair manager..if he found her parents he will give her..

what are u telling prakash...that we will leave her with a man..if u dont care about her then think abt me atleast..how many years i will be childless..

Priya..i understand but..

Look prakash..we will inform this to the fair manager..and then we will take her..if her parents comes and asks for her we will give..if not we will be her parents..that is my final decision..

Priya..i understand but..u will surely give her if her parents asks for her na??..

yes i will..but pls dont snatch this baby from me..

i only care for ur best dear..i just want to fulfil ur wish before u d..die..d..due ..to that horrible cancer..

Priya got emotional..she soon went and hugged her husband..

lets go prakash..we dont want our daughter to catch cold..

they informed the manager and took anu to their home.the couple started loving her as if they are her real parents.,

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mumma..mumma where are u?? mumma..papa..

arpita screamed searching for her parents...

sir did u see my mumma?? arpita asked a man who is drunked..

eh girl...go from her..run..get out..screamed that man 

arpita..

mumma where were u ..i was searching for u ..

beta why are u here..where is anu..

papa..anu was crying very loudly..so i asked her not to move anywhere so that i may search for u..come i will show u where anu is..

arpita went to the place where she kept anu..to her horror..anu was not there..

Arpita..i asked u to stay here na..why did u come in search for us..

Her father was furious..he was shouting at arpita for her carelessness..

but papa I..

shut up young lady..u are being very bad nowadays..

ramesh now it is not time to shout at her...lets search for her.. said Radha..she was horrified..and was frightened not knowing her  daughter's present condition..

they searched for  her everywhere..finally they arrived at the carnival office..

bhai sahab..we lost our daughter in the crowd..could u pls announce it in the loud speaker..requested Ramesh..

wh..what...eh man..get..get out...ok...the fair manager was drunk he soon fell unconscious..

why the hell happening this to me...screamed Ramesh..what did i do to deserve this...

when Ramesh turned towards his wife he saw her fainted..arpita was crying quietly sitting  in one corner..

Radha..wake up.Radha..Radha..he cried tapping her cheeks..to make her conscious..he soon called the ambulance..

ambulance arrived..he and arpita with radha rushed to the hospital..

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After 6 years..

Aarthi...

Yes mam..

Aarthi beta..u did an excellent Job with the assignment..good work beta keep it up..said her teacher..

i know Miss Shobah..Aarthi Prakash is one intelligent student..She will have a bright future..principal said as he entered the class..

everyone greeted

Thank u sir..Thank u madam..said aarthi cutely..but u know the assignment credits goes to my mumma ..she helped me a lot with it..

aww..such a cute girl praising her mother..she turned towards aarthi..beta..tell ur mother that she has done a great Job..

sure i will tell..Mam may i go to my place..

Sure beta..sit down..

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Mumma u know the principal sir was saying good things about me and my assignment  to all of them in my class..

but i said to them my mumma is the one who did it..and shobha miss told u did a great job..

aww..my cute little angel..give me a kissi..

Acchha beti-mumma romance is going on kya???

pappa...

u will give kiss to ur mumma only..bad girl..

prakash..if u dare call her like that...

ok baba i wont call her like that any more..now give me a kissi too..

aarthi kissed her father..and Priya took a photo of her..

okay beta go to sleep now.. good night..

good night papa..good night mumma..

she walked away to her room..

priya...im so scared for ur health condition..it is clearly visible of ur illness..

prakash..dont worry abt that..just take care of our little angel after I die..

I promise Priya..i will take care of her..


to be continued..



Edited by ksfan2 - 11 April 2013 at 8:17am

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