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ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 8- NEW CHAP76 pg134 (Page 84)

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidsubh007



Do you have any idea how happy you make me every time you update??? 




i love your reaction - it makes all the hard work worth it when I get such love from you!



I loved this chapter!! Akash & Payal are definitely playing in the big leagues now!! Can't wait to see what is going to happen there. You have made these two so sexy!!! 


  I so wanted to make them different from what we saw on tv. There was potential here me thought... 

'We're almost home. We'll be all alone, no one will bother us...I'm all yours tonight Khushi,' he told her with a deep intensity that made her toes curl tightly in response.


This sentence made my toes curl!!!  In that case my mission is accomplished as a writer!


How does Khushi handle him???   

Great twist at the end, very unexpected but exciting. 

Looking forward to the next part!!  


I shall try not to disappoint you Hun!
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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Oh god this Arnav and khushi have me reaching for Thanda thanda paani the whole time that they set out and sizzle my laptop screen. 
Wait did you just mention that their relationship will get more interestingWink well **notes to self** sit with cold water the next time naina sends a PM update...Tongue

Chalo that under the belt lovely update hey you put more and more spice into ASR 2 and payalji's relationship... 
Wonder how they will get to know each other **ahem ahem** BETTER??Embarrassed

Hey but i am glad that the whole land deal issue has come up, wonder how this whole thing will play out in Arnav and khushi's relationship. 

So waiting for the next update (with a glass of cold water) and thanks for the PM

Liza

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arnkhunostalgic

when she became his mentee and then his wife, i was just waiting for this come up, and it is, indeed it is going to be interesting, you introduced it int he perfect way, LOL

This update made me so happy, aww cute moments, all feelings of a newly wed bride, the blushing and the lost thoughts, making our toe curl,

 Thank you Hun!
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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _disha_

Wow ...another Fab Update !!! 

The fact that you have started to post updates a little more frequently than before is a huge welcome change and helps to enjoy the story even more so Thank you for that !!!



Thank you, trying to post more often



I never ever imagined i would swoon over Akash... and you are achieving this unbelievable stunt!LOL


Mission accomplished for me as a writer then hehe!



Payal and Akash are burning right now and i cant wait to find out you will wear whom out at this rate !Wink

Arnav and Khushi .. i swear what passion this couple is oozing out its amazing ! Blushing
For some time i went blank i could only read Arnav, shirtless, cooking,low waisted tracks BAS!!
It took me a couple of good minutes to get back on track !Embarrassed


Imagine my state whilst writing...Embarrassed



Then finally with the land issue you brought about a nice twist to this couple and their married life!

Ps: I know low waisted is my addition !!LOL 



 Ehhh all suggestions welcomed! LOL






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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sruthiif.1710

This is unexpected and d exciting...
Employer-employee, mentor-mentee,boyfriend-girlfriend, husband-wife...after sharing these many relationships... I think only being arch-rival in a business deal is left...


Glad you liked it!

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ssyahoo

Interesting twist of events.. They both want the same location!

Love the passion between them and can't wait to see what Arnav does next..

Thank u Hun!
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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shweta1691

I am so proud of khushi Wink She is giving her "hotshot businessman" husband a run for his money LOL



So??? Will he tell her about his involvement?? And if he will then wh gets the land??? Another round of mentoring on its way??? Or will they negotiate like the businessmen they are Tongue??


Ohhh questions and more question!! Love it!



Looking forward to more

Sry for not commenting in forever...i have been steering clear of "post reply" button for quite sme time now Ouch...but am reading this story and will definitely drop a word whenever i can.


Thank you for posting and don't be a stranger now that you finally broken your silence Embarrassed

C ya soon.

And i never thought i had say this but..."aakash is HOT" Embarrassed
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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by warriorprincess

Originally posted by Shweta1691

I am so proud of khushi Wink She is giving her "hotshot businessman" husband a run for his money LOL



So??? Will he tell her about his involvement?? And if he will then wh gets the land??? Another round of mentoring on its way??? Or will they negotiate like the businessmen they are Tongue??


Ohhh questions and more question!! Love it!



Looking forward to more

Sry for not commenting in forever...i have been steering clear of "post reply" button for quite sme time now Ouch...but am reading this story and will definitely drop a word whenever i can.


Thank you for posting and don't be a stranger now that you finally broken your silence Embarrassed

C ya soon.

And i never thought i had say this but..."aakash is HOT" Embarrassed

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