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ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 8- NEW CHAP76 pg134 (Page 48)

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

wow so i see that the games between the siblings sure has started
gosh took them long enough
awww she was waiting and waiting and waiting for akash
who didnt turn up
and when he did well things sure charged as hell
are you guys really sure you wanna do this
i should hope so dears
so let the games start
except it aint games are they
gosh that sure was worth it
seeing them engage this way
sure tells us lot about these two
that there is more to them than meets the eye
and this could be a beginning to a beautiful relationship or friendship or something



thank you darling... well these two are equally strong characters. Lets see if chalk and cheese can mix or is there's an catastrophic explosion in the making...

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smile1412

Awesome naina.. Wasa lil apprehensive at first as I realised this was going to be an Arhi less chapter!!! But amazing!!!! A new love story being told in a different style !!!! Amazing!!!!!!loved it!!!!!!!! So it's all hotting up!!!!!! Carry on... Just a request, pls do add a small Arhi  section in between, when ever u can while writing arhiless chapters ...hehehe... What to do... Addicted to them !!!!!

Lovely naina!!! Thnx for the pm !!
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Awww darling, I know you miss Arhi, but not to fear they are never too far away. Stay tuned!

Naina
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kondhili

Hey i might just fall in love with ASR2 and forget the love that i have for the original ASR...  no you wont, everyone seems to be head over heels with ASRLOL

Loved the update Akash and payal are so awesome.  Didn't really miss the Arnav-khushi all that much cause the interchange that was taking place between Payal and akash was 'almost' or 'as close as' a arshi showdown.   Just there. You are I think the only person who has categorically stated that they didnt miss ARHI ! Love it!!! I think variety is the spice of life me think Embarrassed
But this reserved private man of steel is kind of wining over my heart - 'Dheere Dheere'.
So basically loved your take on Payal and Khushi.

In the midst of all this i completely forgot the most important aspect...Arnav and Khushi are completely ALONE now...YAYAYAYAY Party time...Party

Waiting impatiently for the next update.
Thanks a ton for the PM.  thank you for your comments, love and support for this story Hun!!!
Naina

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KKKA

W P NAINA ...AAKASH  THE CAT TOOK PAYAL'S TONGUE 

IT WAS MIND BLOWING 

YOU DO JUSTICE TO ALL YOUR CHARACTERS 

MISS FLIRTY IS LICKING HER WOUNDS IN HER MIND 

SHE NEVER EXPECTED AAKASH TO NOT ADD 'JI' TO HER 

NAME N CHECK -MATE HER 

LOVED THE SUAVE OUTBURST 

LOVED HIS COOL REACTION 

LOVED HIS LOW TONE BUT STRONG WORDS 

LOVED HER DEAD PAN FACE [IMAGINING]Day Dreaming

LOVED HER SPEAK-LESS-NESSWink

WAITING FOR THE NEXT OUTBURSTApprove

THANKS FOR THE PM 

KEEP ME ALERT 



KKKA





awww thank you darling  - im glad you liked this payal and akash. Well not to worry, I'm sure they will keep you enthralled in the future too.

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riafna

Wow Naina Clap Clap Clap
He was trying to get answers.. thing between them..
I like this too a new love story then waiting for Anjali and Aman too
Nk alone... 
Jalebi Junction... her mentor very impressed so he married her..that one sentence I can't forget...  I'm alittle bit biased but I loved this line too LOL
Thanks for pm thank you for the support darling!!




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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dilectus

Naina you gave me goosebumps darling!!! My heart is actually beating like crazy!!!

 
woohhh...that was pretty intense!!



Oh mannn your comment made my day!!!!  

Its  a major kick to know that my words on paper have the ability to connect and evoke a reaction in a reader. loveee it!!!

Big hugs to you

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by payu2010

the way u tell u r story it is just mind blowing. every character has a role to play at the same time arnav and khushi are the stars. akash in this ff looks like replica of asr with a little less intensity. also payal expresses her view point to certain extent. the way this story is shaping up, I was hoping if the creative had used ur plotline and developed something on that line. keep up the good work. do update soon.



thank you sooo much for your kind words. sending you a big hug!!

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mpuhan

Hey, I've been a silent reader in this forum for a while now. Have been following this story from the day you started writing it and it's one of my favourites. sacch mein.
I love Arnav's character in your story, a practical and strong persona which retains his oomp even after his marriage to khushi very unlike the show where his character was literally murdered post-marriage.
It's high time Aakash and Payal got their due;)
You are a terrific story teller so don't stop. I absolutely love it.



First, welcome to Masterclass (officially)!!!

thank you for loving this story and getting in touch - I know its hard to express thoughts on paper but I really appreciate that you did.

Please don't become a stranger and do stay in touch...

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