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ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 8- NEW CHAP76 pg134 (Page 46)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Good to read about another couple that have great chemistry - Payal and Akash.
I do lke your version, both are fiesty and real. Payal has loads of gumption and Aakash is his own man. Very nice. Looking forward to further updates on these two as well as to ArHi romance.

Thanks for continuing with the story despite a busy life.
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by moomin4455

When an irresistable force meets an immovable object you have speechlessness! LOL

Poor Payal: it's so hard being attracted to someone and just feeling a little let down when that attraction isn't reciprocated in the way you want. Akash does reciprocate...and then some...I wonder what caused him to be delayed??   stay with me and more about mysterious Akash will be revealed. And as for poor Payal, well lets see how she's navigate this...Wink

I wonder what will happen between them now? I love your Akash - he has his own mystery and 'potency' as a character; he's not just Arnav's sidekick.

Arnav and Khushi are just way too adorable!! 



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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!
 
Hope you are doing well ...
 
Very well-written.
 
Descriptive Big smileBig smileBig smile
 
Its nice to see things from Payal's perspective. Interesting ... Very interesting LOL
 
Aakash's view was another part that I liked reading. His thoughts ... an insight into the way things are going for him ...
 
 


thank you darling!Big smile
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by eroni

Superb!!! Loved this payal - akash equation. I am dying to read more... :) thnx


not to worry, Akash and Payal shall not be strangers to this story

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Please update soon!
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LondonChick

That was amazing! I loved it. Now I am waiting for the next update.
Thank you for the PM.
God bless
Jenna


thank you my darling!!!Hug
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by __blossom__

u've taken payash's story at a very interesting point...i loved the chapter!


payal's so different from khushi...yet so like her...
a very interesting update!!!Big smile
so they're gonna deal with it like ADULTS...hmmm...now wat does thst mean???Wink


i think it'll be great fun to read about aman and anjali like this as well..cuz clearly u're side characters are as interesting that they keep thw readers indulged...


great update! loved it!
waiting for the next update..Smile


thank you darling! well lets see what Payal and Akash decide...  I'm curious about this 'grown-up' deal, but I think there's alot of potential here for these two Big smile
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrInCeSs_dIVa

Thanks for the pm...



Great chapter as usual...keep rocking the fan fiction forum with your awesome ff : )

May your ff be eternal <3




awww... thank you very much for the good wishes!!

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