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ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 8- NEW CHAP76 pg134 (Page 42)

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tvserial2012

exquisite...
The best part of your writing is the way you portrait raw emotions. It starts with harmless flirting..in times it brings storm in their mind...
Payal's  bold acquisition...Akash's offer to take the next steps...all in all a mind blowing update. Can't wait to read the next part

Thanks for the PM



thank you very very much! its a challenge to give these two their own separate and strong identity.

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kbtr

That was a great chapter. But missed ArShi. 
So Payal clearly underestimated Akash. And now it looks like she was the one playing the "kindergarten" games! Wonder what will happen in the seven hours? Thanks for the PM. Waiting to read more about ArShi next time.



thank you Darling! but not to fear, your darling ArShi are never too far away.

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rimz_k09

Hi! Smile

I don't think anyone has made Payal and Akash this intriguing. At first I was like no Arnav and Khushi. Shocked But by the end of the update you made me Big smile. This was a amazing chapter that actually showed Akash and Payal's interesting personalities. Clap

Please continue soon. Star


thank you, I'm delighted that you liked them.

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by melonie

Hi Naina,

Wonderful updates. So happy to you have you back in full form Big smile

thank you darling
, its only because of the love and support I get from everyone here.

I always like to read Arnav and Khushi's sweet moments. You are showing their life after marriage beautifully. It's indeed cute that Khushi is still sometimes nervous around Arnav.
yeah, I'm trying to keep it as realistic as I possibly can - she cant all of a sudden be completely comfortable around him as their relationship is still so new. I wanted to show a gradual growth...

Aakash has a spine...Payal has a spine and I am very happy about that. Nice to see their side of the story as well...Aakash is also a mini ASR in the making ..Kyun?  ;)
I wouldn't label Akash a mini-ASR just yet... I think he'll surprise you...Wink

Pls cont soon... your wish is my commandLOL
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

wow so i see that the games between the siblings sure has started
gosh took them long enough
awww she was waiting and waiting and waiting for akash
who didnt turn up
and when he did well things sure charged as hell
are you guys really sure you wanna do this
i should hope so dears
so let the games start
except it aint games are they
gosh that sure was worth it
seeing them engage this way
sure tells us lot about these two
that there is more to them than meets the eye
and this could be a beginning to a beautiful relationship or friendship or something



thank you darling... well these two are equally strong characters. Lets see if chalk and cheese can mix or is there's an catastrophic explosion in the making...

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smile1412

Awesome naina.. Wasa lil apprehensive at first as I realised this was going to be an Arhi less chapter!!! But amazing!!!! A new love story being told in a different style !!!! Amazing!!!!!!loved it!!!!!!!! So it's all hotting up!!!!!! Carry on... Just a request, pls do add a small Arhi  section in between, when ever u can while writing arhiless chapters ...hehehe... What to do... Addicted to them !!!!!

Lovely naina!!! Thnx for the pm !!
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Awww darling, I know you miss Arhi, but not to fear they are never too far away. Stay tuned!

Naina
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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kondhili

Hey i might just fall in love with ASR2 and forget the love that i have for the original ASR...  no you wont, everyone seems to be head over heels with ASRLOL

Loved the update Akash and payal are so awesome.  Didn't really miss the Arnav-khushi all that much cause the interchange that was taking place between Payal and akash was 'almost' or 'as close as' a arshi showdown.   Just there. You are I think the only person who has categorically stated that they didnt miss ARHI ! Love it!!! I think variety is the spice of life me think Embarrassed
But this reserved private man of steel is kind of wining over my heart - 'Dheere Dheere'.
So basically loved your take on Payal and Khushi.

In the midst of all this i completely forgot the most important aspect...Arnav and Khushi are completely ALONE now...YAYAYAYAY Party time...Party

Waiting impatiently for the next update.
Thanks a ton for the PM.  thank you for your comments, love and support for this story Hun!!!
Naina

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KKKA

W P NAINA ...AAKASH  THE CAT TOOK PAYAL'S TONGUE 

IT WAS MIND BLOWING 

YOU DO JUSTICE TO ALL YOUR CHARACTERS 

MISS FLIRTY IS LICKING HER WOUNDS IN HER MIND 

SHE NEVER EXPECTED AAKASH TO NOT ADD 'JI' TO HER 

NAME N CHECK -MATE HER 

LOVED THE SUAVE OUTBURST 

LOVED HIS COOL REACTION 

LOVED HIS LOW TONE BUT STRONG WORDS 

LOVED HER DEAD PAN FACE [IMAGINING]Day Dreaming

LOVED HER SPEAK-LESS-NESSWink

WAITING FOR THE NEXT OUTBURSTApprove

THANKS FOR THE PM 

KEEP ME ALERT 



KKKA





awww thank you darling  - im glad you liked this payal and akash. Well not to worry, I'm sure they will keep you enthralled in the future too.

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