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ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 8- NEW CHAP76 pg134 (Page 154)

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
Anjali married ? Did I miss an update ?

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
WHAT THE...

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''Khushi spun around in chair. Her eyes greedily drank him in as he stood leaning against the door way to her office dressed in a white shirt and dark blue pants, the top two buttons of his shirt were open revealing a light sprinkling of his chest hair. His hands were in his pockets, the sleeves of his shirt were rolled halfway up his muscular forearms. He wore a lopsided half smile as his eyes locked with hers.''
^U will really have to stop describing him this way! Evil Smile I get so mesmerised that I'm not able to read the story further..:P LOL
Just kidding ya! I lovee the way you write! Heart

When they were in his penthouse celebrating since Khushi finally got an investor, It was awesome. Quoting from the same chapter,
'' A tiny bit of sauce had been left behind on her bottom lip and without thinking; Arnav wiped it off it with the pad of his thumb and index finger and then licked it off his finger.''
Can anything be more adorable than this?  Day Dreaming Embarrassed

I love the way they solve their problems. The comfort level which they both share with each other is amazing. One of them just has to say,' Talk to me' and the other person puts his/her full trust in the former and starts sharing everything they have in mind.

The second most cutest thing which I have found in the FF is the way Arnav leaves small-small notes for Khushi! Heart

Oh! And the first cutest thing is the Devil and Angel ,for sure! LOL

I was sometimes giggling, sometimes smiling, sometimes blushing while reading it. It's just perfect. Smile

I love it how Arnav and Khushi are teaching each other little little things about life.

I love this caring Arnav!..on their marriage night, then the party, then the press stuff..Arnav always thought about Khushi first. Thats what makes me love him even more. Heart

OMG! They did 'it' in office and then on couch! Shocked waiting for Kitchen and Car to be their next first! WinkLOL

I'm loving this Aakash! Want more of him..please! Tonguethis Aakash is so much like ASR!..Well, He is also ASR! LOL I wish we had this type of Aakash in the show as well..Wink

And yeah! I was not at all shocked after reading the last chapter..LOL
When I started reading that chapter, I was pretty much sure that this is not Arnav and Khushi..since you wrote only He and She..:P and somewhere, my mind was yelling that this has to be Anjali and Aman. And when I read the last line, I was kind of dancing..LOL :P

After reading 70+ chapters, I can just say 1 more thing, U are queen of cliffhangers! :P so please don't make us hang on this cliff for long and pretty please.. with BS on the top..please update soon! ;) I wanna know what is happening between Anjali and Aman.. Having lots of questions about them..but will wait for next updates..:D

Did I tell you I love your signature. I have already read it 70+ times. 
I love this story as much as I love your signature. If I could, I would have read the story as many no. Of times! <3

I hope you didn't forget me..;P sowwiiee..I commented so late..
Had exam on sunday..and then I started reading it..and completed it last night..:)

PS- please PM me when you update. Though, I'll definitely be stalking your thread..but still..I have very poor memory and I tend to forget things very easily.. So, I'll be very grateful if you PM me. :D

Thanks for the awesome story!

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
OMG didnt expect that
nice update
cont soon
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
its tym fr new thread...
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
uh..uh?? things are going to go to the negotiation table huh? interestingApprove

now i dont know whom i want the property to got to...or maybe i do.. how about both?
surely somehow they can divide up the land and there u go...live happily ever after!!Dancing
a very peaceful decision it will be i tell uCool

nice update lol
and do not give me those descriptions of jeans riding low on hips!! (or maybe i meant the oppositeWink) cuz my mind refuses to come out of the gutter after that!!Blushing

so u see then Khushi becomes at a disadvantage from my side cuz i cant deal with her problems then lolLOL
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
Ha, Ha! that was clever. Big smile

I realised about 3 quarters of the chapter that there were no referrents to the pronouns, that's when I had the first inkling that you might be leading us up the garden path as all of us would have assumed the 'he' and 'she' referred to Arnav and Khushi (well, they are such an amazing couple, one can't stop thinking about them!).

Waiting to see where you are going to take us next with this story.


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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 2:23am | IP Logged
loved it
continue soon di

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