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ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 8- NEW CHAP76 pg134 (Page 147)

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LondonChick

The element of surprise is a good thing but its not a good thing when you get to one of the end of Nainaji's update and you are so surprised that you end up missing you stop on the train and increase your journey time home. LOL.

It was so worth missing my stop though! I was like [:O] when I read the last line. But that was so SHOCKING.

Amazing update Nainaji.

Thanks for the PM
God bless
Jenna
 
oh Jenna I'm so sorry you missed your stop... but it was worth it na Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
 
I was aiming for the surprise factor and shock value with this chapter and I'm so glad that the strategy worked.
 
thank you for the awesommmeee comments!!
 
big hugs!
 
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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nehasupnfan

Like Dean Winchester says, "SON OF A B*&#&!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" While reading it I was wondering what the hell was going on. Did i miss a previous update?? Because it wasn't making sense!!! And man!!!! It finally did at the end! ROFLMAO!! :D Ok I can't stop laughing!! That was beautiful!!! :) :) LOVED IT!!! :) Thank you for the PM :) 
 
LOVE YOUR REACTION!!! it was exactly what I was aiming for!
 
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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by neverbefore

It was the lines about trusting a man that got me truly questioning who this chapter was about. Khushi's never really had that issue really. It was the way you wrot this chapter...like it could have been for any couple. I initially thought it was Akaash and Payal. I really wanted to go straight to the end to find out who it was but the way you wrote this chapter meant the reader had to take the time to appreciate the emotions being described and felt.

Brilliant! Definitely a Masterclass in writing and anticipating your readers.
 
sending you a massive thank you hug!! i'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter.
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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deeswarna

okie that was totally unexpected! when i first reading the update, i thought it was about akash and payal and the way the girl was saying she doesnt do trust, i was damned sure it was payal because she did have a trust issue and a rebellious streak in her!

but i never thought it was going to be anjali and aman! oh my that is going to be such a shock to everyone and mostly arnav! but he knows aman n i think he ll be happy by his di's choice! no one would have suited anjali to the perfection anyone other than aman! they share an incredible bond!

but are they married?? did they elope and got married without anyone knowing!

fantastic update! loved it even it was arshi-less:)

very eagerly waiting for the next update:)
thank you darling for the comments. I glad you enjoyed this chapter!
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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kondhili

I promise i am not lying...i din't do HaawLOL Sachchi...Main jhoot nahi bolti
When the chapter started i knew immediately it was not ARSHI.
Don't ask why mujhe bhi nahi pata..
 
 
hawww... you mean my suspense didn't work on you?! LOL

Anyway for a moment thought it was Payash...then when you wrote about the brown eyes and the fact that some **ahem ahem** had taken place the previous night then i was sure that it was our di and amanji together. Hamesha...Always..Big smile

But amanji calling di his wife...that had me doing Haaw...Shocked
 
challo... thoda toh surprise factor kam kar gaya... LOLLOLLOL
Liza

P.S: Par yeh toh 'ramanchi' chapter tha itna chottu sa...
 
it had to be short darling otherwise it wouldn't have worked.

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
can I just say I am loving your reactions!!!
 
 
 
keep it coming guys!!!
 

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
First of all...i was surprised to find a chap..and then happy!!
As i started to reading i thought it was arnav and khushi but then i felt its not them and i guessed correctly.hoping to know more about them and thier future.i hope all goes well.
To say about the update,it was absolutely superb and amazing!!!
Looking forward to the next chap!!Smile

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Ok the absolute last time I read master class at work!!!
 
I wasn't ready for the heat and with no access to a nice cold shower I was left shimmering all day long.
 
Ok girl friend you have 3 stories on the go now
 
can't wait to see you intertwined them and work your magic.
 
Here is to keeping the drama going.
 
Thanks for the B'day wishes... I celebrated in Vegas!!! Was as mindblowing as this chapter!
 
Can't wait for the next update.
 
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Edited by S003 - 18 May 2013 at 10:26pm

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