Posted: 15 May 2013 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kbtrF A N T A S T I C!!
You have solved the problem in the most amazing way! Yeah, may the best woman... or man(!!) win. I hope Kushi wins. I hope the man decides with his heart and gives Kushi his property. But nevertheless, you have solved the problem, in the only way it should have been solved.I just hope that ASR and AR do not use any dirty tricks. After all, they have the $$$$. But as you said... David and Goliath. And we all know what happened!
I love the way how Kushi has taken over the part of the leader in this relationship. She is the stronger and more functional part of this relationship. And her determination to make this marriage succeed, but treat Arnav as an equal, to ensure that he does the same, speaks volumes about her character. (And perhaps this is what Arnav unconsciously saw, in is heart.) Which I hope will help her win not only this deal, but will keep her marriage intact! Although, I would like to see how they can keep this from encroaching into their marriage. Their words are brave indeed, but both are humans...
I love, love loved the way Arnav said he missed her. Not just the physical part, but also the emotional and spiritual bonding part. That, is true love. Not just the sex! Thank-you for doing that. It was bothering me to hell, that this relationship was based only on sexual attraction that he felt for her. Which is OK, as sexual attraction (SA) is important. But not if it is the basis of the relationship. Because what happens when the SA is no more? So, thank-you, for clarifying that, and in only a couple of sentences! See? I am not that demanding!!!!!
I was so mad at Arnav during the last couple of updates. I'm waiting to see who wins. Perhaps this huge problem will be solved if the man decides on a third party!! Haha! Easy! Well you are the writer! Looking forward to seeing how this will work - in the bedroom as well as the boardroom!
Thanks for the PM.
Vittoria, you are my staunchest critic and yet one of my strongest supporters.
I have to admit, as I was writing this chapter, I kept looking forward to your comments because I knew that you weren't convinced with the trajectory that story was taking particularly in relation the priority - is marriage really the more important thing for these two? more important than the business? I also know the other issue that was bothersome and the topic of great debate was: is Khushi really an equal in this marriage and if she had the ability or right to express her desire for her husband? I hope this chapter proves that the answer is a resounding YES!
thank you for always supporting this story and keeping me on my toes, but most importantly, thank you for always being honest with me.
As always, I await for feedback with bated breath!
big hugs always, your fan,