ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 8- NEW CHAP76 pg134 - Page 101

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neverbefore

It was the lines about trusting a man that got me truly questioning who this chapter was about. Khushi's never really had that issue really. It was the way you wrot this chapter...like it could have been for any couple. I initially thought it was Akaash and Payal. I really wanted to go straight to the end to find out who it was but the way you wrote this chapter meant the reader had to take the time to appreciate the emotions being described and felt.

Brilliant! Definitely a Masterclass in writing and anticipating your readers.

 
sending you a massive thank you hug!! i'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter.
Naina😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deeswarna

okie that was totally unexpected! when i first reading the update, i thought it was about akash and payal and the way the girl was saying she doesnt do trust, i was damned sure it was payal because she did have a trust issue and a rebellious streak in her!


but i never thought it was going to be anjali and aman! oh my that is going to be such a shock to everyone and mostly arnav! but he knows aman n i think he ll be happy by his di's choice! no one would have suited anjali to the perfection anyone other than aman! they share an incredible bond!

but are they married?? did they elope and got married without anyone knowing!

fantastic update! loved it even it was arshi-less:)

very eagerly waiting for the next update:)

thank you darling for the comments. I glad you enjoyed this chapter!
naina😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kondhili

I promise i am not lying...i din't do HaawπŸ˜† Sachchi...Main jhoot nahi bolti

When the chapter started i knew immediately it was not ARSHI.
Don't ask why mujhe bhi nahi pata..
 
 
hawww... you mean my suspense didn't work on you?! πŸ˜†

Anyway for a moment thought it was Payash...then when you wrote about the brown eyes and the fact that some **ahem ahem** had taken place the previous night then i was sure that it was our di and amanji together. Hamesha...Always..πŸ˜ƒ

But amanji calling di his wife...that had me doing Haaw...😲
 
challo... thoda toh surprise factor kam kar gaya... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Liza

P.S: Par yeh toh 'ramanchi' chapter tha itna chottu sa...
 
it had to be short darling otherwise it wouldn't have worked.

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Posted: 10 years ago
can I just say I am loving your reactions!!!
 
 
 
keep it coming guys!!!
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all...i was surprised to find a chap..and then happy!!
As i started to reading i thought it was arnav and khushi but then i felt its not them and i guessed correctly.hoping to know more about them and thier future.i hope all goes well.
To say about the update,it was absolutely superb and amazing!!!
Looking forward to the next chap!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok the absolute last time I read master class at work!!!
 
I wasn't ready for the heat and with no access to a nice cold shower I was left shimmering all day long.
 
Ok girl friend you have 3 stories on the go now
 
can't wait to see you intertwined them and work your magic.
 
Here is to keeping the drama going.
 
Thanks for the B'day wishes... I celebrated in Vegas!!! Was as mindblowing as this chapter!
 
Can't wait for the next update.
 
S
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Posted: 10 years ago
Since nowhere the name was mentioned I had thought it was not Arnav and Khushi conversation. Knew it to be Anjali. You know why? Its this sentence, Sharing the ghost of the past did that. You had peppered it with other hints too. This was my second clue. I am the man with you now. Your other half. These two lead me to think so. Or else you usually give names out.
But very well written where it could be misconstrued as Arnav and Khushi after their silence.
Edited by rulama - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
all the while i was thinking it was akaash n payal πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...
I thought it was Arnav and Khushi...
Loved the Update...

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Posted: 10 years ago
first I was confused
thought khushi arnav then realization hit me
it is not the case then I thought it can't be payish
I guessed in the middle of chap it must be anji n aman
cause same thing happened way back when they kissed
so I guessed rytπŸ˜ƒ