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Did you really have to start the update with him getting his clothes from the wardrobe? 😆
And then again you have to tell us how the white cotton shirt looks on him? Evil woman! And the low hanging, faded, ripped jeans .. I think you know which image crossed mind! Source of inspiration, huh? 😆 And then you have to write .. Untamed. *dead* The next paragraph hardly made any sense during the first read and I had to re-read after smacking my head. 😆
Really loved the small touches you added – Arnav wanting to make Khushi a cup of coffee. That small "hands up" and "mouth zipping" gesture of Arnav. Khushi's backward count to control her anger. Arnav Singh Raizada walking barefoot .. does that tell me something? Yes. Great touch, sweety. You know how much I love you knack for detailing. It does not only make it a good read with visuals but also tells us a lot about the state of mind of the character.
This chapter was like a turning point in this story. And it was all about how the tables have turned. Khushi wants to take a cold shower. He debates where to sit. She starts the conversation while he is sort of scared how to face it. He reacts to her words half-hearing her and she is the one demanding "Let me finish".
I loved how open Khushi was about her entire thought process, starting from her reaction at the news. And you brilliantly penned down the transition of her thoughts – she will not jeopardize her marriage; neither will she jeopardize her dream.
Arnav explained his thoughts clearly too but for me it all came down to, "I would never, ever, risk damaging our relationship for anything, and that includes business." That was it.
So they are up for a challenge outside their bedroom. And they are determined to not let it affect their marriage. The road is not going to be easy. Both are stubborn. Both have temper issues. Both wants to win. And then again .. both love the other bit too much. It would be a treat to see how things turn out.
Brilliant chapter! Starting with biology class to break the ice .. leading to a poignant conversation of business & relationship .. ending up in the couch with a man undressing himself. If you still have any doubt, darling, let me assure you, Masterclass rocks.
In the whole chapter my favorite dialogue was Arnav's "I missed you Baby". Even if you have not explained, I would have known what he meant. 😊
After their marriage, when you said this story is far from over, I wondered what you were planning. I have read a handful of FFs and hardly any managed to keep the pace of the story after their marriage and all that was there were negative roles, nasty twists, past linkups or accidents. You have no idea how happy I am to realize what you have in your mind. I am so looking forward to see them on the table. 😃 Bring it on, lady!
PS: Thanks for using the banner! 🤗 The other one is my personal favorite 😉 .. But after reading this update, this one seems rather apt!
PPS: Indecent. You are using that word a lot lately. What's up? 😉
Edited by Omoraboti - 10 years ago
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