the way u tell u r story it is just mind blowing. every character has a role to play at the same time arnav and khushi are the stars. akash in this ff looks like replica of asr with a little less intensity. also payal expresses her view point to certain extent. the way this story is shaping up, I was hoping if the creative had used ur plotline and developed something on that line. keep up the good work. do update soon.
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