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Arshi OS: A night with Jr. Raizada (Page 15)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 12:53am | IP Logged

I loved the OS….it was really cute and funny…

I just loved the little Ansh and his cute talk…he is behaving like ASR….specially SAMOSAJIROFL…..sure ARSHI kids are going to be more naughty and talkative…

NK and his Hindi…ROFL

You wrote it beautifully…what an awesome attempt.

Keep writing….all the best.Tongue

Cheers for the PMWink

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
lovely update.

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crizal

Great OS dii Heart Clap

thanks dearBig smile

 

" Yaa we will see saying that he moved closer to capture her soft rosy lips for a passionate good night kiss'.. "

<--- BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

" The moment their lips met there was a knock at the door " 
<--- I hate Raizada ppl coz of dis Angry ...disturbing my Arshi in lovely dovely moments LOLLOL

i too hate it yaar



"
It is just that we have been disturbed so many times during our private moments' that you have started Imagining things." <---


ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

" Why all big people take so much time to open the door? 'unbelievable.. "
<--- U r very small to knw these things baccha wat they do inside LOL


"Arnav chuckled listening to him and kneeled down. What are you doing here champ. Your room is next to ours. Its late now go and sleep

<--- Arnav trying to get rid of him n wants to go in arms of her wife LOL

ekdum sahi pehchaanaWink


 " Then why aren't you both sleeping yet? " <--- Aww he is soo innocent Embarrassed LOL

 " No'. it is not good to disturb your parents at night'It's a bad manner. Don't you know this?? And they must be tired from the journey. " <--- Itna understanding baccha LOL

" Samosa ji " <--- ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

 " Khushi giggled and Arnav promised himself not to leave Nk this time.. was his Nannav and all family interruptions were less that now even the junior most member of the family was hell bend on spoiling his lovey dovey moment with his wife? Angry It felt that the whole world was conspiring against him to make him distant from his wife' He just hated it. " 

<---LOL poor NK..ese hi fas gaya is mein LOL


 " He settled in bed and pulled the quilt on three of them'.(all three still sitting) he so wanted to sit next to Khushi.. Caress her cheek, her hand, pull her in his lap, to breath her natural smell' but it seemed all his feelings went into bin for tonight " <--- LOL

 "Khushi maasi I love your eyes and your what the what the song'.will you be my Girlfriend?? " <---ShockedShockedShockedShocked

"What the?? Excuse me champ' he said poking his finger on Ansh's shoulder' She is already my wife'go and try with someone else'.ok? " <--- wat shd be tried ?? BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

no details...hame laaj aati hai

" Khushi maasi why is your tummy grown up so much??? " <--- All credits goes to MR . Arnav Singh Raizada

" Because she eats too much'came an instant reply from Arnav who got his turn'to take his revenge from Khushi. " <--- LOLLOLLOLLOL

"Oh really Khushi'all this is because of me?? Aren't you equally responsible for your pregnancy he said winking" <--- Haww shameless Raizada LOLLOLLOL LOL

 "Ansh listening to everything very carefully ,ohhh but how did baby went inside ?? " <---He is also very shameless LOLLOLLOLLOL

If I pray to devi mayia'will I also get a baby inside my stomach he asked innocently getting up from the bed making Khushi and Arnav laugh out loud . "

<--- Again he turned to b innocent  LOL[ Just like me LOL ]

hai to baccha na

" I can't see tears in your eyes Khushi' saying that he moved forward and placed a quick peck on her lips. "<--- He wanted to do everything quickly , don't want to get disturbed later LOLLOL

he heee

 " Khushi will our children be so naughty?? I mean will they too ask so much questions " <--- LOL

 " Khushi nodding a no'not at all Arnav ji'they will be more smart and more naughty after all they will be our kids " <--- Perfect Answer Clap LOL"

thanks...i knowWink


"my KC's AC team" <--- wat is dis??Confused ...CC kya ??

yaa it isSmile

my replies in Green... m very  very happy
thanks for giving me such a long comment

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vajram

hi shivi dearSmile
loved the OSThumbs Up
it is awesomeClap
a very l8 hearted storyHeart
u know frm titleEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i was expecting ARSHI babyLOL
butOuch
my guess is totally wrongErmm
(vajram  learn  raizada means not only arnav their are other members also)LOLLOL 

he he EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED DI


i loved him so muchBig smile
bcz he is like his samosajiLOLLOL
awwwEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
khushi is pregnantBig smile
poor arshiCry
disturbances to their private moments is routineLOL
shivi babySmile
you have cracked me up lol...,LOL




khushi ur imagining that somebody knocked the doorROFLROFLROFL
loved the bond b/w ansh-arshiBig smile
awwwEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
cute boySmile
proposed to his massi in-front her possessive hubbyWink
i should tap ur back for ur dareLOL

lolswaa

his ques are just awesomeEmbarrassed
ofcourse ans alsoEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i wished if their was ARSHI babyApprove
but no problemWink
u'll do it in the next osTongue
totally super duper OSSmileEmbarrassedEmbarrassed






wii surely try di... m happy than Ansh character is enjoyed by all.

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -saranya-

oh my shivi baby...

ur frst OS was damn good damnit...
i just loved it...

i really loved ansh...i like his name too...

thanks dii

arshi moment...Day Dreaming 

he said she is imagining as its a routine to get distrbed,,... LOL ROFL ROFL one cn see hw frustated he is with all those disturbances...

he standing down and arnav missed him...it happens na... cute but...

yaa I have seen this...but I just love this little cute things

samosa ji...!! ROFL ROFL NK 's hindi is phenomenol... 

loved ansh doubts...
i also had so much such doubts tat tytm in childhood... Wink Wink 



all together..its a awesum OS...loved readng it...enjoyed much the fun of it...

do wrte more like this...will be waiting shivi baby...

wil chk ur index later..im just gvng my pc to my sis...now..

bye Hug

thanks di for ur lovely response

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 4:15am | IP Logged
awesome Smile

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:12am | IP Logged
awww... that was cuteClap

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:20am | IP Logged

Wow shivi that was damn cute OS Big smile Loved it to the core !

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