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We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51 (Page 25)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Brilliant updateClap
loved it sooo much
Such beautifully written.
Its was just bang on.
Awww thanx god viren remembered abt d last ni8 wht he saw luvd his reaction.
Hawww Shockedhope jeevika is fine n nothing bad happens to her.

Cant wait to d next update.
Do continue soon n thanx 4 d pm

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Awww!! kayz m Seriosuly loving dis Story line It' is Vry Unlike Virika ..
Hw perfcetly u write evrytym kays Ur really An amzing Writer kays  Can't Wait for Next part 
Hope jeevika Is Fine Feeling really bad For her can understand Wat she is Going throuh Bcoz Loosing a child is Not a Joke Ouch

Waiting eagerly for next part!
Update Soon. . .




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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
awesome update karina..so sorry for being soo late! What happened to jeevika...thank god atleast viren realised now Cry its outstanding..simply superb..thanks for the pm..do continue sooon Smile
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Wara082007

AFTER READING this UPDATE... I am LIKE Cry

THE UPDATE was EMOTIONALLY WRITTEN...

I am VERY GRATEFUL to YOU for GIVINGUSSUCH an  AMAZING PORTRAYING of FEELING of BEING DEPRIVED...

The AFTER EFFECTS was MISSING and IGNORING SOMEONE you REALLLYYY LOVE

AWESOME BABES!
 
 
 
i love your style of commenting..Big smile

THANK YOU BABY!

BDW YOUR SIGNATURE LINE IS JUST SUPERB
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
Thank You all for your feedback Smile Hope the story is getting boring. I know the updates are small but I'm doing that deliberately. This story will have a few more updates before I conclude. Hope you enjoy this one! Heart Please do not Reserve a comment, and make sure you unreserved on the previous chapter! Thanks...

*** chapter 5 ***

Questions unanswered and hearts pounding. Viren's heart led him to the bathroom. He thought he could feel her being around them, somewhere nearby. He pushed open the bathroom door in search of his better half with their siblings right behind him. There she was. There she lay. Viren stayed there, not moving an inch. Standing like a statue while Virat and Manvi ran to Jeevika's side. Her body was drained from the water of the shower which Virat finally shut off. More than the shower, it seemed as Viren was shutting off. Slowly and painfully unable to understand the moment. What had Jeevika done and why?

He came back to the moment and went towards his wife. 

virat - "Bhai, you bring bhabhi out and I'll get the car out fast"

Viren was just silent and looking at Jeevika. Her eyes looked so black and her face so thin. He could feel the bones of her body sticking out knowing something was wrong. She looked so fragile and sick. Viren picked her up carefully balancing his weight with hers taking her out. He took her outside as fast as he could feeling like there was time bomb right now. He wanted her to get better, and that too fast. This was all his carelessness. Virat was waiting at the front and opened the door so Viren could quickly enter the car with his wife. He held her body close to his chest, her hair in his face, his heart touching hers. That moment made him feel there was something majorly wrong. What led Jeevika to take such a drastic step without Viren even knowing. Virens tears were falling on his wife's face, while blood dripping from her arms on his shirt. They were engulfed in such a way and they were sharing each others pain. Virat reached the hospital breathing a little sigh of relief hoping that the doctor's could take Jeevika in immediately. He helped his brother out who was still engulfed in a hug with Jeevika. The doctor was there to take Jeevika in. He saw the emotional state Viren was in, so he decided to let him be there with his wife. Viren carried his wife inside the room and placed her on the bed, not wanting to let go of her, but had to. He wanted her to get better, because he was dying by the second. By the minute. Seeing the love of his life so helpless was making him cringe. Making him hate himself. The doctors started treating her first placing hot blankets over her body raising her body temperature. They slowly started her on a drip and started cleaning her wounds. The nurses helped her change from her wet and bloody outfit to a hospital gown. Viren stood from a distance seeing his wife bare with scars over her body. Wounds that were never there before. Bruises he had never noticed. What was it that led them being to so distanced that these things had become invisible? 

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Edited by Kays94 - 14 April 2013 at 11:14pm

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
Wohhhooo for the first time ever i am first on kani's story! LOL
This definitely calls for a victory dance! Dancing
Will you join me kani?ROFL

Coming to the update!

Phenomenal!
Never thought this track in the way you showed it!
How i wish the ria track had shaped up this way!

Jeevika tried committing suicide!Shocked I never thought she will take such a drastic step!
I feel so bad for viren also! He must be cursing himself so much after seeing jeevika in that condition! CryCryCry
Hope she is fine! Unhappy
You portrayed everyone's emotions beautifully! Their inner turmoil! 
You definitely should be applauded for this!
Whenever i think this was the best update ever, you post the next update and outdo the previous on!
Superb update!Star





Edited by KryRan14 - 14 April 2013 at 9:26pm

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Awesome updateClap
such beautifully writtern ,u hav again left me speechless wth ur update.
Awww jeevika Cryhope she get well soon i cant see her like dis.
Awww poor virenDisapproveknow his state of mind he must b guilty by seeing his love of life lying down like dis.
Hope everything get well soon.

Sleeping beauty wth ur exams running also u never fail to give us brilliant update hunnnHug

Edited by Virika-luv - 14 April 2013 at 9:18pm

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Superb Update..loved itSmile
Viren's reactions and his emotions on seeing his life lifeless before his eyes were written beautifully..
Cant wait to see Viren's reactions when he finds out the actual reason..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon..

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