Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51 (Page 19)

girl97 Goldie

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged

wow that was amazing
feeling too bad for jeevika
viren is leaving her alone
felt my heart aching for her
amazing update btw

-Deeps- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 14055

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Just read all the three parts.
They were absolutely brilliant. 
The way you've expressed everything is simply beautiful. 
Aw! I pity Jeevika. And the thing she's doing is definitely wrong. Viren's so busy to realise all this. I hope he gets to know it soon.
Keep up the great work. :D
Kays94 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:31pm | IP Logged

*** chapter 4 ***

virat - "Manvi control yourself. Right now we have to think and be there for bhabhi. Gosh how I wish bhai was here right now" 

viren - "Virat, Manvi whats going on?"

Manvi and Virat saw Viren at the entrance of the Vadhera Mansion. Manvi's emotions were out of control. She ran to Viren and hugged him. Viren was confused but just comforted her unaware of what was going on. 

viren - "Virat what is wrong? Did you say something to Manvi?"

virat - "Actually bhai its'.

Just then Viren's phone interrupted again. 

Manvi let go letting Viren take the call. Virat comforted Manvi in the meantime. It had been several hours since the incident this morning and it haunting the two of them more than ever. 

v - "Virat Manvi I'll be back in half an hour. I need to go pick up some files from office"

Viren was about to leave when Manvi held his wrist. 

manvi - "Jiju you cannot go. I need you here" he said thinking it was one of their silly jokes again.

Viren - "Manvi this is important. I promise I will be back as soon as possible and we will sort Virat out"

Virat - "Bhai you have to stop. Do you even know what is happening. You are forgetting about your first and for most priority. Something is wrong with bhabhi and we can't figure out what"

Just then Viren started remembering the night before and how he saw those scars on his wife's hands. He suddenly realized what a horrible husband he was. How could he not remember to question her, or remember that. He ran to his bedroom to meet and comfort his wife. He didn't know what was going on, all he knew was he had to make it better before it worst worst. Or was the damage already too far done to be controlled now. He tried opening the door, unable to. Locked outside was Viren with Manvi and Virat. Manvi was now in bad shape. Unaware of anything going on with Jeevika in the first place, she was now disheartened. What had her di done now? Viren and Virat kept banging on the door to come to no response, no conclusion. They had no idea but to break in. Viren's strength was seeing by him pushing to get to his wife, yet his inner strength was vanished. What had he done'. She was his responsibility and he had his priorities all wrong. They eventually were able to get in and all six eyes, four of them being wet were scanning all over the room to see nothing. Where was she gone' Where was the most perfect wife gone? Where was the most caring sister gone? Where was the most loving bhabhi gone? 


List of my work Heart Kays94 Index!!!!!

Edited by Kays94 - 11 April 2013 at 1:54pm

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Dhoxi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Remembered to un-res ROFL

Dude You dont know how much I'm in love with this update like seriously, it's amazing Clap

I'm glad that they stop Viren or else he would have left Unhappy

Everything you wrote is just described perfectly... You made us feel that moment going on with your story Thumbs Up 

Edited by Dhoxi - 15 April 2013 at 7:16am
Marzii IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8697

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:32pm | IP Logged


Karinaaa i cant even count how many times i read this SS
its just a fab one...your too good yaar
this update was so touching too
Thank God Viren remembered about last night
i really hope Jeevika is fine..im so desperate to read the next update
i dnt even know what to say honestly
im short of words keeni meanySmile
hope we get the next update sooner
cant wait to read more <3 love ya <3
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoBig smile

Edited by jeevi7 - 12 April 2013 at 8:16am
ashna1406 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2886

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged


just read all the 4 parts n sorry for late comment

im loving this new story n the new jeevika
this is the first such story im reading

n its just Clap Thumbs Up

always speechless after reading ur updates Embarrassed

i hope viren does something n jeevika returns back to normal Smile

omg whts happening Cry
jeevika missing ShockedShocked 

continue soon for us to knw the continuation n im eager Wink

Edited by ashna1406 - 13 April 2013 at 12:31am
romanticgurl070 Goldie

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Posts: 2374

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
nice one
what's wrong with jeevs???
too short update Cry
how can viren forget abt jeevs
nani2630 Goldie

Joined: 26 September 2012
Posts: 1497

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
OMG the suspence is killing me awsome update continue soon plz

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