We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51 - Page 41 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

826173

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beta party time ...

100 likes on chapter 1 phewww

whoppp whoppp 🥳

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Sarah Ashraf

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Posted: 10 years ago

I know my reply to your updates is looonnng due, but I'm actually having the most hectic time these days. I've read all updates of wfl, heartbeat and this, and will get back with comments very soon.

Love

Sarah

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Neetu

@alonelove

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats for getting 100 likes in the first chapter.

I actually had tears in my eyes both happy n sad.

Superb update

I loved the ending a lot

N u ending with the title we belong together was awesome

It was one of the best story

I will be waiting for ur next story

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

end ker dia?? itni jaldi ??
not fair yaar

anyways
awesom blossom ending
with jeevs happiness
aww viren is such a gud husband ..

loved it yaar

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826173

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Posted: 10 years ago

101 likes and i know who liked in 101 😛

My teacher ji (Muskii )

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome chapter it was

loved it

can u just please write a bonus part to it please

this story needs a hats off seriously n even u deserve a hats off

do write a new story soon but please give a bonus to this one

brilliant story

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congo for this 🥳

👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼 🤗 😃

Edited by surbhi1994 - 10 years ago

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Sunita

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Posted: 10 years ago

i read the update in morning and i am commenting it on night!!!! sorryyy for the late reply..i was busy with my classes..

Finalyyy u successfullyy completed this story also..well, i seriously loved this story...tooo greatt to be ignored... be it anythng...sadness, happiness all emotions were portrayed realyy beautifully and last but nt the least..very well written... 👏

Go ahead..keep continuinggg writing stories..one of the best talented writers i hv met in ths forum... i noe many others too... hats off to all the writers in this forum...

now..coming to uddatee...i literalyy died reading this update..the pain jeevika was carrying within herself...omg!!! truelyy wow momentt... i could literaly imagine the whole situation... :((((

i love how they handle each and every thing very well... their maturity, understanding..wahhh!!!!

and woww... the last few lines were ssooo fabulouss and amazingg... BEYOND WORDS!!!!!!

hugss and clapsss for ur Karina Janab!!!!! ❤️

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soty24

@soty24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Perfect ending hehehe loved it

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

im in tears again why is everybody writing such beautiful words today honestly this story blew me away from start to finish thankyou very much

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Kays94

@Kays94

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhoxi
Unres ❤️

OMG

it was such a perfect ending like you always have a perfect title for perfect ending. This story was just amazing. I still wish cv could have shown something like this in real but they are just -------- 😛

I'm glad that Viren found out everything by himself. I wonder why didn't manvi found it. She was the one to give that doll.

Viren support for her was just awww. No-one else would have supported Jeevika like that before not even Manvi.

I love the way you write story like it makes us feel like its totally in real and we can even imagine it. I will be missing this story. It was just perfect.Loved it so much.

From start to ending everything was just amazing. I'm sure no-one can ever describe anything like this. The way you write, make us feel it, everything is perfect. Glad to read a story like this.

beta you deserve more than 100 likes ❤️ muwahhh.

Aww thank you my ashy mashy trashy!!!

Thanks for reading and tolerating every piece of crap I write 😆

No matter what I know I always have you to read my stories!!!

Love you so much ❤️

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