Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51

Kays94 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 November 2012
Posts: 14528

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Hello Peeps!!! 

Back with another SS (short story) It's relevant on the current track Smile Please give me plenty of feedback and tell me if you would like me to continue or not. Thank You!!! Big Sissy Heart I hope I can distract your mind a little, and remember I love you Hug

chapter 1 = page 1
chapter 2 = page 8
chapter 3 = page 14
chapter 4 = page 19
chapter 5 = page 25
chapter 6 = page 30
chapter 7 = page 35
chapter 8 = page 39
chapter 9 = page 46
chapter 10 = page 51

*** chapter 1 ***

Viren entered the house at around 10 PM. It was quite late, around the time everyone was getting ready to go to bed. These days Viren would come home this late just because of Riya. I mean after all he had gone through the same situation as her. He was able to get Jeevika out of the phase, and now he was hoping to do the same for Riya. He wanted to see his friends happy. Viren knew that he had his loving family that helped him and Jeevika cope up with the loss of their child, and now he wanted to do the same. Be the family for his friends. Viren entered the corridors of the Vadhera mansion to see Virat and Manvi sitting on the sofa. They were both drinking coffee and just talking. They saw Viren and both of them got up and walked towards them. 

viren - "Virat, Manvi where is Jeevika?"

manvi - "I think she's gone to sleep jiju. Is everything okay? You've been coming home late these days"

viren - "Yeah you remember my friends Riya and Sambhav? Well they don't really have anyone here. So I go in the mornings to help them out. Plus his wife is going through a lot after her miscarriage. So then I go to office late and get caught up with all my work. That's basically it"

manvi - "I hope she gets better. Loosing a child is hard, and no one would know as much as you and di"

Viren looked down getting a little emotional, but tried controlling himself. 

viren - "I'll go and check on Jeevika" 

virat - "Okay bhai' Do you want any coffee or anything?"

viren - "I'm okay. You two go sleep now too"

virat - "Yeah bhai, we're going. Goodnight"

The three of them smiled and headed in opposite ways. 

Viren opened the door to his room and saw it all dark. He switched on the lights to see Jeevika on the chair. She was asleep with her hair covering over her face. Maybe thats why Viren was unable to see her swollen eyes. Viren kept his bag on the other chair and went to pick up Jeevika, carefully placing her on the bed. He covered her up with the blanket, tightly making sure she wouldn't feel cold or get sick with the cold breeze coming through the room. He then went to go change and get comfortable. He freshened up coming back into the room and texting his friends making sure they were all right in their new house. He got a text back saying they were alright. Viren smiled and then turned off the lights to go to sleep. He lay down when he felt Jeevika's arm. Something felt weird, he didn't know what it was. He turned the lights on, and then over at Jeevika. He saw scars all over her arms. He was shocked at seeing this. What was going on? How did this happen'. These scars were hard, thats why Viren felt them. That means something happened a while ago that Viren was unaware of. Viren tightly held onto Jeevika holding her in his arms and went to sleep. 


Edited by Kays94 - 05 May 2013 at 10:46pm

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MehakGera Goldie

Joined: 18 January 2013
Posts: 1722

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged

yipie me d first one

jumpong dancing

omg kareena y r u so perfect

i mean u stories r superb

just lv dem so much

i was waiting for an writinh piece on dis track

n now ss on d track n specially by u is cherry on d cake

u should read my comment on ur pic story n u will noe how mad m for ur stories

riya is everywhere making differences between virika

what happened to jeevika

hope she is fine

update soon

Edited by mgera3024 - 07 April 2013 at 2:18am

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mariarauf48 Goldie

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Posts: 2339

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged

a sory on the current track by miss kinno.pinno
before i tell u abt the update is that u ve to cont it got it
so the piece of writting was amazing
poor virika this all makes dem.remember abt deir past
virwn getting emotional n controlling awesome
poor jeevika she was trying
loved how he placed her in the bed <3
he can actually feel her arns n scars omg
sleeping tightly awww
now u better update fast as i m getting curious
ty for telling me to res first but necermind :-P
great work !

Edited by mariarauf48 - 07 April 2013 at 2:55am

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drishti112 Senior Member

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Posts: 438

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged
great plot!
just loved it..i know dat u will nail it as u hav done wid ol ur earlier stories...
u r an amazing writer..!!!! Heart
update soon..Smile

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Nishtha.Relan Goldie

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Posts: 2266

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
wow karina di, amazing story, the concept is awesome, just waiting eagerly for the update... every story of urs is the best and i noe this story will be the best tooo... waiting eagerly and thanks for the PM... 

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nani2630 Goldie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Superb writting loved it and cant wait for continuatin
update soon plz

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Wara082007 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged



You Should Definitely Continue it ... There is no SECOND Thoughts about that...


As always this was also the BEST WAY to DESCRIBE the EMOTIONS and GRIEVE FELT by the PERSON LOVE you the MOST

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Saba_Pari IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6637

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Amazing perfect updates asusual its a great story plz continue soon

Edited by Sabapari - 07 April 2013 at 3:09am

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