OS: A night at a hotel room - Page 5

wow nice os dear..luved reading it and other than the name spell errors everything was beautiful...pls do write more...

Originally posted by: .sio.angel.

wow nice os dear..luved reading it and other than the name spell errors everything was beautiful...pls do write more...

Thank you dear...yeah the error was a big one

Originally posted by: DKB532

Omg!! Very cute! Continue writing!

Glad you liked it

Lovely OS! But u might wanna edit the Ashad part! Haha its Asad :)

Originally posted by: enrique

Interesting work

Would love 2 read more

Plz continue

Its 2 sweet

Thank you
I would love to write more😊

Originally posted by: neenabinu

cute OS

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: meow23

i thot asad wold toss in his sleep and fal on zoya and mitwaa magicc

Sorry for disappointing you

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Lovely OS! But u might wanna edit the Ashad part! Haha its Asad :)

But otherwise, AMAZING! ❤️

Have already edited it.
Thank you

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Sorry for disappointing you

hehehhe.. u updtng ryte.. update supa soon

*EDITED*Edited by PhoenixRadar - 11 years ago