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i so loved it dear..so well written..
all the pairs were described in their own sweet way..i loved payash bonding...
flattered by nk-lav desire...
and i think they are the two pairs who took the step in its rgt sense...i dnt knw wht for shyam is irritated but i dint feel gud readng them together..
and ya..here comes our hero...
whtsoever..be him rude..arrogant..ruthless one thing i liked in arnva out of ipk is him being clean with girls..and i could see the same here in ur words inspite of her being his wife...
awesum job dear...
chappy 1 was a massive hit..beliv me 👏
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