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Posted: 10 years ago
resss  

edited..

i so loved it dear..so well written..

all the pairs were described in their own sweet way..i loved payash bonding...
flattered by nk-lav desire...

and i think they are the two pairs who took the step in its rgt sense...i dnt knw wht for shyam is irritated but i dint feel gud readng them together..

and ya..here comes our hero...
whtsoever..be him rude..arrogant..ruthless one thing i liked in arnva out of ipk is him being clean with girls..and i could see the same here in ur words inspite of her being his wife...

awesum job dear... 
chappy 1 was a massive hit..beliv me 👏
Edited by -saranya- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yipeee...harhem...fasttt  

im impatient 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow .
Arnav ki junoon khushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
 Always daughters take the place in hearts of their father and the very thought of separation will break the hearts of each of them.

true... the pain of goin from home s really heart breaking 😭

 Arnav who was beside Khushi couldnt help but wait with her till she finishes her Crying session with her mother.

he he...

y cant he comfort her...😡

 In reality she is more desperate than me to reach her Sasuraal..

ha ha...nk...thum bhi na...bahut masaak kar rahi ho 🤣

The Bride and Groom were made to wait at the Guest House door for the ladies to circle the Puja Thali and make the Bahu enter her new home fulfilling all the Rituals.. 
y arnie didnt go in RM😲


nice start...

waiting for the next day of the couples...

how its goin to change...
Edited by Nichuss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
spending first nigt seperatly nice, shyam is pretending personallity, childish lover nk and lav, nice update overall
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amaziing. What is arshi's past story
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Posted: 10 years ago
simply superb.loved it,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
There is surely something with Arnav n khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update👍🏼...so the new life of the four couples starts...every1 seemed happy except khushi😔
waiting for their upcoming  moments...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
res.

**edited**

have tons to comment today!

firstly. Anjali.. hope Shyam is not bad with her.. Grandchildren.. LOL.. Anjali go hide your blush behind your UNDERSTANDING hubby dear.. :p

Awww,Payash I love here! Great bonding drafted with parents Di..

NK and la.. wat will you both go through during the later stage of life? I mean, La and her MOOD-SWINGS? LOL.. ;)
Like very much to see this teasing NK.. Someone is going to get lucky tonight .. (in this case 4,but only 2 I know I can be sure.. LOL)

and wow! I just love this tradition! LOL.. Why is ARSHI uncomfortable.. aaj raat kya hoga? Khushi if okay with you,let me adjust myself at your place just for tonight.. Lola.. ;p

and again Shyam.. Uff..

(am waiting to read the scene where I can say -

'Suhaagraat hai,ghunghat utha raha hu mai' ☺️ NK la or Payash,were are you busy blushing?)

chI,I just read.. Shyam did IT.. why did I read it? yuks.. ^_^

Awww,Payash also sweet! They too did IT.. :p

Wild Nandanya! LOL
I know who drafted that! ROFL.

and now.. *rubbing hands* ARSHI time.. <3<3
I knew this would happen.. Obviously no consummation for ARSHI.. :-/

I know bout this too who drafted it.. :-p

great one! awesome gng.. wanna read more yar! cnt only do with this Serial 'Junoon' on k
Life Okay.. LOL.. Want more!

update soon.. Awesome blossom start.. ;)

p.s.-Sorry for late.. 😳Edited by kuts - 10 years ago