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Two Shot: 'Di I wronged Khushi for you' Part 2 Upd (Page 16)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
awesome story dear
liked this

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Awesome... In the show they never gave the respect khushi deserve from others... Finally everyone understood khushi... M happy to read a os like this

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Rima, how did I miss this? 
It was so brilliant and intelligent and all that should have been there in the show...every word you wrote brought out their characteristics and story in such a beautiful way...not only did Khushi suffer the ordeal but Arnav too...everyone except Anjali ..she manupliated and coerced everyone as she deemed fit...

For once I am glad Arnav spoke up and against Di in support of his wife, and spoke the truth, Shyam did let him know about Rani sahiba being the kanta in the middle...everyone knew Khushi' s fianc was also called Shyam...Arnav did love her before he married her , he was even going to tell her that night...I just wish he had trusted her feeling for him and his for her...there were so many signs...waiting to be read...

I loved the part about the will...I never looked at it like that...she leaves him the most precious thing she owns from amongst the few things she owns ..and he nothing even though he has so much to leave..
Her love for him had no conditions and his was always conditional ...

Loved that he walks out leaving everything and everyone, it must have been hard for him ...it must have been tough for him to realise how his Di, for,who he has sacrificed so much thinks its all a misunderstanding!,,,,

Loved the end, khushi getting the respect and appreciation ...

Just beautiful...I could go on and own...thank you for writing this...I wish the CVs had too! 

A friend wrote this OS...very well written...it's from after Khushi getting to know why Arnav marries her ! If you get a chance do read it, I think you will enjoy it! 




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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
wonderful...

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
Loved it 

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Very nice! You really showed how much in denial Anjali was all along and totally ignore all the clues right in front of her.

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