FF: Mangalpur Madness #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 75

haha...OMG...SO passion here...now i am expecting something cheeky here...as if some interrupting dem and i can already imagine their faces...haha...love it updt soon

Perfect! I like happy endings too! 😆  This kiss kissa makes up for the ones we'll never see on the show!! 😆

Amazing!!! Brilliantly written! Better than what I expected! Aik dum chikaas xD 😆😃 And Mashallah the kiss was amazing! Can't wait for more !! :DD

Mindblowing Fanfic read it in one go lol please update soon )

U r darling darling u r darling darling ...
...Wowww take a bow dost ...u keenly maintain the emotions ...very pious ...so pure love and ya Kiss ...speechless ...
U must be gem by heart ...u made my night ...

Ab story continue karo ...nai to m sending goons ...okay

Loved their kissing session 😳

@going green.. my love u ve outdone urself.. a kissing scene wid such detailing.. gosh made me blush n am feeling all gooey..:p :) its was simply fab..:* :*

Awesum update
Cont Soon!
Lvd ur FF <3

gud...i m happy now...mindblowing...