FF: Mangalpur Madness #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 63

please continue...their so cute...

nice update ...

hey

Awesome update xxx i luved it loadsss xxx cnt w8 4 da nxt update xxx

Awww that was adorabaly cute!!! Loved it sooo much! Can't wait for the next one!! 

wonderful update 😃 plz update soon

Omg!, i cant wait for the nect part :))))

wow
this ff is amazing
 you just got yourself a new fan

Originally posted by: webuser7

Nice update but why won't Asad let the Doc check out Zoya's ankle? He can't let jealousy get in the way of her well being. Not done!! 😔

BTW, they can't leave Mangalpur without a Mangalpuri Zoooyyyaaa dahaad. Come on! I know you won't disappoint me! 😉 Bring on the "adventure"... Zoya is already hurt, wonder what is in store. There will be a lot of carrying Zoya around!!! Hee! Hee!

Haha it was supposed to be a very slight injury, I think I may not have brought the point across strongly enough. I'm quite bad at drama haha I'm more into writing about funny/cute moments I think, so I dunno if I'll be able to write out Mangalpuri Asad to perfection. But anyway I will try! Thanks for your comments (:

Originally posted by: rutu83

...and there's the idiotic grin again

Hahaha you're adorable (: