FF: Mangalpur Madness #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 42

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Omg I can't believe it was maryams bf..
I though it might be zoyas cousin u know..
But I loved the update

Although I hate the fact that u left us hanging there,
I know that u'll give us many Asya scenes in the next update..

I can't wait so please update the next part soon :)))
I love this Uff!!
I have been stalking ur Uff for quite a while. :pnEdited by Sirit-of-Dead - 10 years ago

Nicely done! Agreed, writing primarily is for your own pleasure. Going back to your work and re-reading it is so much fun. Looking fwd to more reads! Let your creative juices flow:)

hahahahah oh Asad. Silly man, always reacting before asking question. But it was too short :( lovely update hun :) can't wait to see what happens :D

Wow..nice..luvd it..waitng 4 nxt..do pm me plzz

Awesome update. Please continue soon.

Amazing!!!!!!!!! I loved it.

Loved the Update..

I thought so... But, poor Mr. Khan.. Tochhh... Ho gai... But, How could zoya just get away from the room... No, I thought kuch to hoga..😆 What are you coming up with.. I m way to excited... And waiting..

Continue soon... Btw.. You have turned me to a stalker... I am stalking here for update every now and then. Never done this before...😉

Dee

okay... u hv hanged us on cliffhanger... but funny update... asad's realization🤣

omg..dis ff is love!! so damn ossum.. got my hands on dis today itself..its so lovely! waiting eagerly for the next update!