FF: Mangalpur Madness #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 23

sigh its sooo romantic😳

Lag jaa gaalee ke phiirr yeaa hasseen raat hoo naa hoo, shaayad iss janam phir mulakaat hopo naa hoo! 

Loved it thanks looking forward to more Asad and Zoya parts

Originally posted by: Irresistible.

I love this story.

Edit*****

HOLLA LOVE!!!

OMG.

Da kiss on da palm.
Made me go asdfghjklasdfghjkl.

And the asad in the mehendi on her hands...

WHY DO YOU WRITE SO DAMN WELL?

And Asads OCD 🤣

Lol, the awkwardness wiv em is so cute <33

PLEEJ update soon love, PLEEJ <3

Aw haha thank you!! <3 Promise I'll update when I find the time, definitely (:

Originally posted by: enrique

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Again a superb update

Mehandi ke bahane asad is going way too romantic

Loved his way of concerned loved

totally loved reading it


I dnt mind if u make it as ff or even a saga

I loved it totally

Beautiful

Worth drooling

Handcuffs ne mila de jodi

Hahaha! I actually laughed out loud when I read the handcuffs ne mila de jodi part :p Maybe I should've just named my FF that, since they've been handcuffed for most of it anyway hehehe. Thank you!! (:

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Lag jaa gaalee ke phiirr yeaa hasseen raat hoo naa hoo, shaayad iss janam phir mulakaat hopo naa hoo! 

just BEAUTIFUL as beautiful as the song, as beautiful as the night described in the show itself. 

enjoyed to the core. 

Oh my... thank you so much!! Saying that what I've written even holds a candle next to the magic of the actual lag jaa gale sequence in the show is in itself such a huge compliment. Thank you!! <3

very nice Update..
Well i wonder what with this 2 do in the room..lol
continue it soon

Ohhh I can't tell you how much I lovee this storyy :) I loved this part especially :$ Greatt worrk and do continue cuz I can't wait to find out what happens next ;)

hayee...so sweet...asad kissed zoya's palm...pls do give us longer updates...ok  thats my wish...make the update however big or small u want but pls make it quick ones,,,

Mindblowing update...AsYa romance made me shiver!!