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SidYusha FF: tera mujhse hai pehle ka.. LAST PART! (Page 3)

libsrocks IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged
nice one...intereting...same story and background but different treatment given to it...i really like it

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Serviana IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Interesting story...please continue!!!ClapClap

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michelle281194 Goldie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
PART 3: ek hazaron mein meri behna hai

On his way home, Shiv was humming a cheerful tune. Well, meeting Anandi Singh was much more interesting than he had expected. When he reached home, his brother Mahi greeted him at the door.

"Bhaiya! Aapke liye surprise hai! Dekh-", Mahi began but a flash of black hair ran smack into Shiv and.. shrieked.

"Shiv Bhaiya, main aa gayi! Surprise!" Shiv's little sister Sanchi was back from hostel and had come to meet him.

"Sanchi my doll! Kaisi hai tu? Kab-" Shiv was very happy to see her. She was the apple of his eye.

"Saara pyar darwaze par hi kar lenge kya? Ya andar bhi aayenge? Sirf ye bandariya nahi aayi hai, baaki sab bhi aaye hai." Mahi interrupted.

Sanchi smacked him on the head and they entered the house. Maa, Papa, Choti Maa and Daddu greeted Shiv warmly. After dinner, Sanchi and Mahi were eating Shiv's ear off. While his brother was rambling on about his last cricket match, Sanchi told him all about a girl at her hostel who had helped her in her studies. Shiv was happy to see all his family but the real cause of his smile was his encounter with his dream girl. Mahi sensed something. After everyone had slept, he cornered his brother.

"Kya baat hai, Bhaiya? Aaj kuch alag-alag lag rahe hai?", Mahi said, grinning. "Aaj raaste mein kahi meri Bhabhi mil gayi kya?"

"Tujhe kaise pata chala??", Shiv asked, his eyes wide.

"Bhaiya! Kaun mil gayi aapko? Maine toh mazak mein poocha tha!" said Mahi, in surprise.

"Oh! Woh main..", Shiv relayed his meeting with Anandi. He was grinning and tousling his hair the whole time.

"Ooh nice, Bhaiya! So, did you ask her out?"

"Mahi! Tu pagal hai kya? Yeh gaon hai! Yahaan aisa nahi kar sakte."

"Haan haan. Aap toh aise bol rahe jaise Udaipur mein hote toh date ke liye puchte! Iss mamle mein, you're a total coward, Bhaiya.", Mahi laughed.

As his younger brother ran away before he could beat him up, Shiv promised himself that next time, he'd ask Anandi out. He was not a coward! He could ask out a girl.. Right?

Edited by michelle281194 - 07 April 2013 at 6:25am

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sudhajo Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Thanku for the sidyusha magic again. 

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msl1995 Newbie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 7:32am | IP Logged
awesomeee!!!! ... I love it ... The story start-off is really goood... Keep going... Can wait for the next update...
michelle281194 Goldie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
PART 4: Ghar Aayi Bitiya Rani

"Dadisa! Maa! Ganga!", Anandi ran into the haveli like the wind.

Everyone rushed out, surprised to hear the voice of their 'Laado'. Anandi hugged everyone and kissed little Mannu on the cheek. Dadisa made her sit on the sofa next to her while her mother, Taisa and Ganga got busy with getting snacks.

"Mhari laadkanwar, tu toh kal aanewali thi na? Aaj kaise-", mused Dadisa.

"Main aap sabko chaukana chahti thi! Ho gaya na hakka-bakka!", laughed Anandi.

She told them about her mishap but, for some reason, felt too shy to talk about her encounter with Shiv. Everyone was delighted to see their darling daughter so happy. Though Dadisa admonished her while applying medicine to her hand, she was secretly happy that Anandi had hurried home. After dinner, Ganga and Anandi chatted for hours and only realised the time when Jagya and Mannu came to call Ganga.

"So, Anandi, ab kya plan hai? School ki toh chhutti hai toh tum kya karogi do mahine? Chattar-pattar hi karoge tum dono?", teased Jagya, while both girls giggled.

"Na Jagya, main soch rahi thi koi summer job karu.. Hospital mein ya Bapusa ke saath. Ghar baithe pagal ho jaungi.", said Anandi.

"Suniye na, woh Collector Sa keh rahe the na uss din ki Bheem Singh Sa chhutti pe jaave hai.. Toh unko assistant chahiye hai.", Ganga reminded her husband.

"Arey haan! Yehi sahi rahega! Anandi, tum kal taiyyar rehna, hum Shiv se milne jayenge." He turned to Ganga. "Bheendni Sa, aap toh bahut samajhdar ho gayi hai! Ab chalein? Bahut der ho gayi hai."

Ganga and he said goodnight to Anandi and left hand-in-hand with their son on Jagya's arm. This brought a smile on Anandi's face. Now, finally, all their lives were at peace. Her family, her career, her studies were all on track. But that night, as she wrote in her diary, it was something else that had her smiling. It was the prospect of a new job with a new purpose.. And a new boss!

Lets see how the job interview goes next time.

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Sneha...Love IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Wow, Michelle ClapClapClap You just made my Sunday full of SidYusha again. Thank you for that. I read all three chapter at once, completely overwhelmed. Liked it sooo much, especially the end " It was the prospect of a new job with a new purpose.. And a new boss" Embarrassed

To say I liked your story would be an understatement, I just LOVE it.HeartHug

Looking forward for new updates.

Love mini graphics

Edited by loveansh - 07 April 2013 at 8:05am

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msl1995 Newbie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
OMG..OMG... Cant wait for the next update... Awesome story... I love the way you started the story.. Its amazing.. Dour writing is really goood!!.. I cant wait for the second encounter of AnSh... Pls update sooon...

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