SidYusha FF: tera mujhse hai pehle ka.. LAST PART! - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
"Collector! Toh aap hai Shivraj Shekhar! Maine aapke baare mein bahut kuch suna hai!" And indeed she had.

6 months ago, Jaitsar had been declared a district and Shivraj Shekhar had come here. Though she had been the last Sarpanch before the transitory municipal council had been formed, she had not attended his welcome event due to her exams. Through Gulli, Bapusa, Jagya and Ganga, she had heard many good things about him. In such a short while, he had brought in a computer lab for her school and laid the foundation for a canal project and railway line. He had won the hearts of all the villagers through his humility and diligence.

"Mera naam Anandi Singh hai. Main Jaitsar ki-" She shook his hand.

"Sarpanch! Aap Anandi Ji hai! Wow I'm so happy to meet you!"

Everyone in Jaitsar knew Anandi's story. Married at the age of 8, her husband had left her for another woman a few years ago. But she had been strong and had completed her graduation and begun to work for her village. It was because of her and her family's efforts that Jaitsar had a secondary school for girls and a fully-equipped charitable hospital. Her ex-husband Jagdish, who managed the hospital, had told Shiv how she had forgiven him but refused to take him back when he saw the error of his ways. She was a self-respecting girl, after all. But she had been kind enough to help him get the acceptance of his family again. When he fell in love with a domestic abuse victim, Ganga, Anandi had helped them get married. Today, Jagdish lived a happy life with Ganga, her son Mannu and his family only because of her. After the village-to-district transition process had begun, Anandi had decided to complete her studies. Shiv had heard that Ms Singh was now completing her Masters of Social Work at Jaipur University. Apparently, she wanted to start a college in Jaitsar and become a full-time teacher.
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Posted: 11 years ago
They both smiled at each other in admiration. Anandi asked him how he was adjusting to Jaitsar while he enquired how her studies were coming along. He told her a bit about how her family was and she spoke about her school and college work. They hardly realised when they had reached her house. Shiv placed her scooter outside the door.

"Thank you so much, Sir. Aapse milkar bahut achcha laga." She smiled at him.

"It was nice meeting you too," he said, grinning. "Bye.. Aur haan, Jaipur laut te samay Jaitsar ke roads ko baksh dijiyega. Car ya bus kar lijiyega."

"Haha, Ji!", she laughed.

As he drove away, tousling his hair, Anandi had an insane urge to call him back. She blushed and entered the house.


Lets meet Shiv's family next time!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for your positive responses.

I'm sorry for the small part-posts, I'm doing this on my phone.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome start.. Waiting for ur nxt updt... :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one...intereting...same story and background but different treatment given to it...i really like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting story...please continue!!!👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 3: ek hazaron mein meri behna hai

On his way home, Shiv was humming a cheerful tune. Well, meeting Anandi Singh was much more interesting than he had expected. When he reached home, his brother Mahi greeted him at the door.

"Bhaiya! Aapke liye surprise hai! Dekh-", Mahi began but a flash of black hair ran smack into Shiv and.. shrieked.

"Shiv Bhaiya, main aa gayi! Surprise!" Shiv's little sister Sanchi was back from hostel and had come to meet him.

"Sanchi my doll! Kaisi hai tu? Kab-" Shiv was very happy to see her. She was the apple of his eye.

"Saara pyar darwaze par hi kar lenge kya? Ya andar bhi aayenge? Sirf ye bandariya nahi aayi hai, baaki sab bhi aaye hai." Mahi interrupted.

Sanchi smacked him on the head and they entered the house. Maa, Papa, Choti Maa and Daddu greeted Shiv warmly. After dinner, Sanchi and Mahi were eating Shiv's ear off. While his brother was rambling on about his last cricket match, Sanchi told him all about a girl at her hostel who had helped her in her studies. Shiv was happy to see all his family but the real cause of his smile was his encounter with his dream girl. Mahi sensed something. After everyone had slept, he cornered his brother.

"Kya baat hai, Bhaiya? Aaj kuch alag-alag lag rahe hai?", Mahi said, grinning. "Aaj raaste mein kahi meri Bhabhi mil gayi kya?"

"Tujhe kaise pata chala??", Shiv asked, his eyes wide.

"Bhaiya! Kaun mil gayi aapko? Maine toh mazak mein poocha tha!" said Mahi, in surprise.

"Oh! Woh main..", Shiv relayed his meeting with Anandi. He was grinning and tousling his hair the whole time.

"Ooh nice, Bhaiya! So, did you ask her out?"

"Mahi! Tu pagal hai kya? Yeh gaon hai! Yahaan aisa nahi kar sakte."

"Haan haan. Aap toh aise bol rahe jaise Udaipur mein hote toh date ke liye puchte! Iss mamle mein, you're a total coward, Bhaiya.", Mahi laughed.

As his younger brother ran away before he could beat him up, Shiv promised himself that next time, he'd ask Anandi out. He was not a coward! He could ask out a girl.. Right?Edited by michelle281194 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanku for the sidyusha magic again. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomeee!!!! ... I love it ... The story start-off is really goood... Keep going... Can wait for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 4: Ghar Aayi Bitiya Rani

"Dadisa! Maa! Ganga!", Anandi ran into the haveli like the wind.

Everyone rushed out, surprised to hear the voice of their 'Laado'. Anandi hugged everyone and kissed little Mannu on the cheek. Dadisa made her sit on the sofa next to her while her mother, Taisa and Ganga got busy with getting snacks.

"Mhari laadkanwar, tu toh kal aanewali thi na? Aaj kaise-", mused Dadisa.

"Main aap sabko chaukana chahti thi! Ho gaya na hakka-bakka!", laughed Anandi.

She told them about her mishap but, for some reason, felt too shy to talk about her encounter with Shiv. Everyone was delighted to see their darling daughter so happy. Though Dadisa admonished her while applying medicine to her hand, she was secretly happy that Anandi had hurried home. After dinner, Ganga and Anandi chatted for hours and only realised the time when Jagya and Mannu came to call Ganga.

"So, Anandi, ab kya plan hai? School ki toh chhutti hai toh tum kya karogi do mahine? Chattar-pattar hi karoge tum dono?", teased Jagya, while both girls giggled.

"Na Jagya, main soch rahi thi koi summer job karu.. Hospital mein ya Bapusa ke saath. Ghar baithe pagal ho jaungi.", said Anandi.

"Suniye na, woh Collector Sa keh rahe the na uss din ki Bheem Singh Sa chhutti pe jaave hai.. Toh unko assistant chahiye hai.", Ganga reminded her husband.

"Arey haan! Yehi sahi rahega! Anandi, tum kal taiyyar rehna, hum Shiv se milne jayenge." He turned to Ganga. "Bheendni Sa, aap toh bahut samajhdar ho gayi hai! Ab chalein? Bahut der ho gayi hai."

Ganga and he said goodnight to Anandi and left hand-in-hand with their son on Jagya's arm. This brought a smile on Anandi's face. Now, finally, all their lives were at peace. Her family, her career, her studies were all on track. But that night, as she wrote in her diary, it was something else that had her smiling. It was the prospect of a new job with a new purpose.. And a new boss!


Lets see how the job interview goes next time.