Balika Vadhu


Balika Vadhu
Balika Vadhu

SidYusha FF: tera mujhse hai pehle ka.. LAST PART!

michelle281194 Goldie

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
This is written with the wonderful Pratyusha Banerjee in mind. I suggest you don't read it unless you can visualize her.

Part 1: Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye

A young girl was standing on the side of a lonely road in a hot, baking village. She had never felt so foolish before! Nursing her bruised arm, she rebuked herself.

"I never should have tried to get here on my scooty! Romeo can't handle these roads! Ek pothole aaya nahi ki Romeo ka handle bhi gaya aur mera hand bhi! Maa-Bapusa don't even know that I'm coming and cell isn't working! What am I going to do! Hey bhagwan, koi gaadi bhej do!"

Squinting in the dust, Anandi could see an open air jeep coming towards her. A young guy that she had never seen before was driving it.
Shiv's attention was diverted toward a girl who was waving at him.. A hitchhiker! In Jaitsar! In his last 6 months as Collector of Jaitsar, this was a sight he had yet to see. Most of the villagers travelled by foot or on cycle. Who was this little princess?
The man stopped his jeep right beside her. To put it precisely, he was a total stud! She was wondering how Mr Handsome had come to be in her village and how had she not known? Surely Gulli should have told her that a Greek God had descended into Jaitsar. Who was this man?
Disheveled and bruised, with her damaged scooter lying in the dust, she looked tired. But even in such a state, she looked beautiful.. Radiant.. The kind of village beauty his brother Mahi teased he would find someday. Who was this delightful vision?

Sorry for the short post but I just wanted to set it up. Do you like it? Lets get them talking next time!

part 1- page 1
part 2- page 2
part 3- page 3
part 4- page 3
part 5- page 5
part 6- page 5
part 7- page 7
part 8- page 9
part 9- page 10
part 10- page 12
Epilogue- page 13

Edited by michelle281194 - 13 April 2013 at 2:50am

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the_Rij Senior Member

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Nice start. Loved it and want to read more Clap Thumbs Up

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Bikica_Biki IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 10:31am | IP Logged
                                           Michelle Clap
                  Nice and interesting start. Please continueDay Dreaming

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pussycat Goldie

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
really lovely start.. Star
manjery IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
michelle please do continue dearTongue very well written
fastforward IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Good going Michelle..I am hungry for more..
crazy4pari Senior Member

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged
much needed at this time...keep s a wonderful start...
mukta13 Groupbie

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 11:56am | IP Logged
very gud start,do continue.

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