~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 18

Ankie before I die out of tension u better update the last part.
This part was awesome.
Tanveer-I hate her sooo much.
I love u so much for the slap.
Asad's rage was shown very well.
The way u had written about Asad's helplessness after such a betrayal was wonderful.
I feel really bad for ur jeeju.
I can't see him cry u know.😳Zoe ko theek kar doo.
Again a cliffy.I hate u.😆I want Zoe to be perfectly fine.
I also want a good hot shot romance after Zoe is discharged from the hospital😆
I know I'm besharam but I'm craving to read some good romance b/w ASYA right now and I wish u may fulfill this wish of mine.😳
You are a wonderful writer sweetheart.
Plz try to update ASAP.

Oh na na 😛
Billo Rani got a tight slap from Asad! Ow! 😃

ankie i loved it !!!continue!!asad wow!😉😆its very interesting!!

Ab to tujhe tamatar aur patthar marne hi padenge😆

sorry baccha cudnt comment on da 1st part coz of kambakht studies
ahaha!!!kya likhti hai ap mera sunday toh ekdum funday ho gaya ye padke😳
yippie!!!i luvd chudail's qatil-e-confession
haww!!!i so adored dis akdu ahmed khan acting insane only & only 4 his zoya😉...aur tune toh usse swear bhi karwa lia😆...by GOD!!!gussa isse kehte hai beta😛
awiee!!!asad bleeding zoya sinking kya cliffhanger hai boss😲
ab jaldi jaldi last part ud karde tujhe bohot DUAein milenge😃...kyuki ye battameez dil manena yar🤣
chal lambaish comment kar dia ab khush ho ja meri pyari si ankie pankie🤗

Awesome ...
u are brilliant yaar   ...
love it ...
pls update 3rd part . am dying to read it ...👏

i want the UPDATE NOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow that was sooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was amazing and I loved how Asad slapped Tanveer!

Superb ankie...tujhe pata bhi hai tune KAMBAKHAT ZOYA kitni bar use kiya is part me lol

I jst read ur ff...