~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 12

Pasya

@Pasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

omg... Its so nyc as lyk u... Lve u that slap... & for next prt which u wil post today...!!

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Nisbah

@-MitwaIshqPe-

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ankie agar ye update itna acha nehi hota toh aaj mein tumko bhi zinda gadd deti iss cliffhanger ke liye par kya karo agar tumhe zinda gadd diya toh update kaun karega!! 🤣
Lol jokes aside its awesome Ankie!! Cant wait for the next update and I laaoo you for making Asad slap Tanveer!! 🤗

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Sara Khalid

@Saralicious

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Another cliffy 😡

I hate u for that 😆

I loved this part 😳

Tanveer n asad scene was the best

I hope show mien bhi aisa hi kuch ho

Now update ASAP

Jaldi se

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820169

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ankie ki bachhi! how could u do dis? you know we wud get crazy reading dis n hence u stopped here. not fair yaar. u do know u write exceptionally well, don't you? den y torture us? plz yaar aj hi update karna da remaining part, now you be merciful enough n end da suspense. ok?

well I must say da part was SUPERB. it was all I want Asad to be in QH n dat punch on the bitch's face was just perfect. I wish Asad ended her life dere itself, y leave such a burden on the earth. his helplessness n agony reminded me of da entire Mangalpur scene again n seriously I had my fists curled n eyes moist hearing his scream.

please yaar do cont, please, its a request.

love,

Nimra.

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Bhumika

@Nukti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awsome part 👏👏

Another cliffy😡

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Geetha

@Geet_Ha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice 😊 Finally truth is out 😊

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great part now give us the next part!

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreet23
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Okay, first of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING 😊

Second, it was an awesome update, again. 👏

And third, I'm gonna kill you for another cliffy. 🤢 🤣

Thank you thank you! Hope you enjoyed it :D

Well am enjoying that aweesome moment after ending it with a clify! 🤣

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BlessedSoul
That was quick update Ankie... Loved it... Running out of words so bear

Aliena Dii! thank you! well if i didnt update it today, they would have seriously killed me :P soo yeaa! i guess i needa update the rest today itself again 🤣 hope it was worth your time 😳

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