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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
My os a story  of love and a mistake
EK GALTI
the sun was setting behind the mango grove which fringed the western extremity of Devgarh ,for a few days there had been downpour of rain but now every thing was peaceful and quite just like the little apartment had always been since five years ,the owner of the house loved issolating himself ,it was said that once this owner was a great singer sensation of whole India but now everything changed now his silent tear have become his song and his loneliness his melody , whole day he is drown in the memories of his long lost wife ,MANYATA ,and shed tears behind this tears there was a smile but no more now ,there was happiness and laughter that filled in the home once a time but no more ,there was love in his heart but no more as the person whom he gave his love was no more it was all because of him ,he was responsible for her dead ,he KILLED her ,that incident still pierce his heart like an broken glass  ,a bright day with sunshine laughing at him and his beautiful wife curdle in his arms like a small baby no couple had ever been as happier as them it was there 2 years anniversary and manyata was pregnant actually since the day they tied knot uday wanted to postponned a baby ,manyata knew that this could harm his career and before being his wife or lover she was his best friend since childhood so she supported him in every aspect of life and supported him in his this decision too ,finally manveer wait was over when finally uday took over his dad ' s buiseness and they planned it out together so now manyata was five months pregnant just the other day manveer had gone to hospital and seen there baby through ultra sonography ,uday was very excited about the baby so he already made two separate room one in pink and other in blue and he even got names of the baby ready it was there 2nd anniversary and like every year they got ready to leave for temple and whole day they spend there on there way back to home uday was driving the car and the high roads were quite no vechiles anywhere it was the peace before the storm ,manyata rested her head on the window while uday admired her the pink setting sun reflected on her face beautiful as he put the strand of her hair back of her ears ,she looked at him and smiled
UDAY:i cannot believe it you are going to be a mother and yet you look so tempting
MANYATA:what do you mean mr uday veer singh after becoming a mother i will not look tempting anymore
UDAY:yes actually i was planning to divorce you and remarry you know a hot sexy model
tears started to swell up in her eyes as she roller her face away and said
MANYATA;yea why not you will say like this only after all you are bored of me now right tried of using me now you need some new entertainment
now he was fuming in anger it was just a joke and why was she over reacting
UDAY;manyata i was just jocking and yes whats wrong if i said the truth after being a mother girls do loose there charm
MANYATA:so this is what you had stored all this year for me only lust and no love
UDAY:see manyata i do not know what has got into you i do not want to pick a fight and upset our baby
he started to speed up the car as she did not speak to him ,her silence made him even more angrier as he drove in the speed of wind as manyata clunced to his hand
MANYATA:uday please slow down the car i was just jocking
UDAY;i was jocking too baby i will always love you
MANYATA:nad my dearest hubby you will never get a girl like me who will care for you more then her life
UDAY:oh really you care for me more than your life
MANYATA;ok uday now slow the car baby is having problem and so is the mother
UDAY;fine
he tried to slow it down just to see that his breaks had failed ,his face turned pale as he whispered
UDAY;manyata the breaks have failed
manyata without thinking even once opened uday 's door and placed a soft kiss on his check saying
MANYATA;i love you
she pushed him off the car ,he fell down and when he got up he saw the car hit  a tree and blasted he went near the car to find a totally burned body with just a mangalsutra hanging on the neck ,he carried manyata 's body in his arms and raced to the nearby hospital as te doctor announced her dead for just one mistake he lost his wife forever after five year he recalled the incident as he stood on the railing of the terrance he cried and sa
id

kitni ajeeb baat hai na...jab tu mere paas thi to har dam yeh sochta tha ki kya main teri kadar nahi karta
aur aaj jab tu mere paas nahito yeh ehsaas hota hai ki qadar to hamesha se hi thi
par tujhe na khone k yakeen ne andhaa kar diya tha
bhala kya pata tha aisa bhi kuch ho sakta h
mera tujhse alag hona itna hi namumkin tha
jitna tera mujhse nafrat karna
baitha hu thandi zameen par
aankho mein wo teri ek dimple wali pyari si hansi
haath mein teri ek tasveer hai
jise dekh kar har dum main tere chehre pe aane wale baal tere kaano k peeche laga deta hu
tujhe bht tang karte hai na
mobile mein fake call pe tera naam daal diya hai
shuru karke khush ho jata hu
aur jab aas pas koi nahi hota toh mann behlane k liye 2 4 baatein bhi kar leta hu
tere jawab to mujhe pata hi hote hai na
teri payal ab mere haathon mein bandhi rehti hai
ekdum waisi hi
haan bas uske ghungroo zarur nikal liye hai
taaki teri maujudgi ka yakeen to ho par ehsaas nai
yaad aati hai wo teri manghadat kahaniya jo roz raat tum mujhe sunati thi
haule se "babie so gaye kya?" puch kar ek gudnyt kiss de jati thi
tum sulati thi to so jata tha
ab tu nahi sulati to aisa lagta hai meri neend hi so gayi hai
wo meri pyari si bachchi...bheed mein kahin kho gayi hai
jab bhi teri yaad aati hai...toh apne takiye ko bht zor se hug kar leta hu
magar yeh to mujhe wapas gale hi nahi lagata
dekhna isko...daat de...bolna isey tang na kare...bolna...
gaane nai sunta hu main ab
na sun pata hu apna hi gham
har cheez se tu judi hai..har cheez mein tu basi hai
dil mein kahin faasi phasi hai
yaad aati hai wo gali mujhe
jahan main aaya karta tha
khud coffee shop mein khade hokar
tujhe balcony mein bulaya karta tha
gali th ab bhi wahi hai..dukaane bhi wahi hai
bas bheed bht ho gayi h
uss choti si gali mein mere liye ab jagah nahi
abhi abhi toh raah mili thi ki manzil hi mood gayi kahin
...I MISS U...MISS U SO MUCH...

rota hu..bhilakta hu
har dum girta padta hu
koi nahi hai puchne wala ..koi nai hai puchta "babie zyada to nahi lagi na?..aa kissi kar du...ab sab sahi ho jayega"
kaun mujhe roz roz bf ki yaad dilayega.
kaun baat baat par pyari si on karega
kaun mujhe ulti sidhi harkate karne se warn karega
kaun mujhe horror movies dekh k raat raat bhar jagayega
kaun phone pe itni zor zor se chillayega..kaun mujhe anjaano se baat karne se rokega...
kaun baat baat par tokega...kaun mere ek phone k liye din bhar wait karega
kiska 2 n half parathe kha kar bhi pet na bharega
kaun banega bachcha mera
kisko pyar karunga
kiski bht hifazat karunga, bht laad karunga main
cheen leti apne aap ko
kyun cheen li mujhse wo meri bachchi
bht maasoom h wo
akal se h wo thodi kachchi
janta hu main wo zinda h...zinda h kahin tujhme
bandi huyi hai nafrat ki zanjeero mein
jinko todne ki taqat nahi hai abhi usme...par yeh na sochna ki yeh bhi hai ek koshish
tu kabhi nahi aa sakti zindagi mein meri
aur bhula na paunga wo pyari si yaadein teri
shayad is chote se dil k liye tu bht badi ho gayi hai
shayad is pyar k sagar mein kuch bundo ki kami ho gayi hai
khush rakhna isey aye mere khuda
tere aansu kabhi na ho teri aankho se juda
mere aansu jhuthe lagte hai to nahi sunegi ab tu meri siskiyaan
yeh meri kasam
is dard ko daba lunga main..in aansuon ko chupa lunga main..
in yaadon ki aag ko ashkon se bujha lunga main
leta hu ab ek aakhri alvida tujhse
karta hu ab is choti si kahani ka pyara sa ant
khush rehna tu hamesha
khushiyaan mile tujhe anant
ja teri nazro se ab maine mooh mod liya
teri khushi k liye ab maine tujhe hi chhod diya...

saying this last line he jumbed off the railing and died

   the end

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:34am | IP Logged
yayy!first to commentBig smile
awesome Os diClap
meri kabhi itni himmat nahi hua ek sad story padhne ki lekin aaj ek choti si koshish ki! di poori kahani mein kitna dardh bhara hua tha ek haatse ne usse uski saari khusiyan, uska pyaar,uski khushaal zindagi sab cheenli!!
aapne jo Hindi ke bol describe kiya hai that was amazingThumbs Upaankhon mein paani aagaya..end mein bada accha hua wo zinda reh kar kya karta?usse uski yaadein satati rehti!really bohoth touchy tha di its really superb aapne feelings ko bohoth acche se describe kiya hai specially pyar kya hota hai ye unn Hindi waale bol se pata chalta hai!
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Edited by Asmimelody - 06 April 2013 at 8:03am

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:39am | IP Logged
awsssmmm anniii my tragidy writter happy ending kun  nahi kartii

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by huma12.

awsssmmm anniii my tragidy writter happy ending kun  nahi kartii


ok phehei baat mei tragic end karti hui q ki navina jiji sei inspired huiROFL
aur mere ff aur ss mei happy endings hai os mujei sad ending rakhna pasand hai
i am glad you like it jijiEmbarrassed

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
loved it!
It was a superb os but had a sad ending.
Thanks 4 the pm.

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanah12

loved it!
It was a superb os but had a sad ending.
Thanks 4 the pm.

i am glad you liked it
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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
very nyc awsome amazing zabardast
sis this is mindblowing u r the best n very
talented yaar awsome very very nyc
lved it loving caring sab thaaa excident ke
baad jo lines thi this is my fav i really like all
lines n this is awsome mindblowing os
i m very like plzz os likha karo n happy end
bhi kiya karo i happy ending story but ya first
story haan jiska sad ending mujhe acha laga
n i really really like this story i loved it
as or bhi oss likhu n i m sad mujhe first
comment karna tha but koi baat nai its okk
very nyc awsome mindblowing mazing i loved
it i really liked it great job nyc ending i really
loved it thxxx for the pm n love u sisBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileSmile

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