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ArHi SS: An Apate Affair#2, *Completed* (Page 63)


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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged



This has to be my favorite chapter yet.

Lots and lots of jealousy, how awesome!

I loved the whole story you wrote around NK-Lavanya, kitna bada MU ho raha hai! LOL

And a possessive Arnavji, always a treat to read!

So Akash and Payal are seeing each other, how will that play into the general plot?

Ab Khushi 'sweetheart' ho gayi?

I share your thoughts about the lack of closure for these characters in the show, so happy to read FFs that give them their due!

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 13 April 2013 at 11:10pm

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1chilly IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Loved the NK and Arnav conversation. It is a real Comedy Of Errors. 
NK wants to make Lavanya jealous but ends up angering Arnav. 
He wants to call Khushi sweetheart but Arnav wants him to call hdr Bhabhi.
Khushi's sister Payal Gupta is Aakash's secret girl friend.
The breakup has still not taken place.
Loved this update. Can only wait for the next one.

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Dimz13 Senior Member

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Everyone is marking territory...! Aakash is the wily billy goat...all hide and seek with Payal.

From girlfriend to direct 'Bhabhi'...Arnav is covering miles in a hurry.

I too loved NK and La's cute dimples...! They probably would have paired well...but with La having been Arnav's go..I not sure about the comfort level.

We haven't heard anything about Kushi's family and how they take being a fake go..except for bupkis constipation episode...that was too funny..!

Wonderful update.

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Hot_Chocolate IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
superbly written...!!!

 i am on floor ...laughing...seriouslyy...LOL
arhi and their fights...i so love lavanya's line here... 

"ASR are you sure she is not your girlfriend for real? She answers you back and how! ROFL

but akash is worrying about certain PAYAL GUPTA here...!!!

"Your sister must be Payal GUPTA then? She reached yesterday from Lucknow? What does she do?"

poor man is seriously in tension here...Wink

ohh...famous cutie pie N.K is here...the flirtatious boyy...who openly flirts wid ARNAV'S KHUSHI and donn giv a damn to ASR glares...!!Angry
OHKK...N.K is trying his luck and flirting to make LA jealous...!! but arnav is definately getting "j" and quickly claim his territory...scratch that...'fake territory'...!!! 

"NK why don't you select a pet name for my Khushi too? Khushiji sounds too formal"

i sachmuch love this line...MY lol lol...!!! 

"She is my sweetheart and nobody else's"
really...and he satisfied by seeing her blushing...Embarrassed
but why is she is blushing...!!!  

"Bhabhi. That is what you should call her. Am I clear?"
chalo ji...bhabi toh wo bann gayi...wo b 'fake wali'...!!ROFL

yaar abb love shuv start b kara do...wait nai ho raha...Wink

that personal life wala dialogue is my favourite...kitni baar rewind kar kar ke dekha tha...*sigh*

sach me! nk-lavanya are so made for ecah toh itne FFs pad liye hai ..k muje lagta hai k they are together in the show ...!! in every ff they are shown as a hume dikhta tha wo cv's ko kyun nai dikhta tha...!!!Confused

p.s...iss baar b poori try ki hai...acha comment likhne ki,,,,bas!WinkWinkWink

Edited by avantisharma - 14 April 2013 at 3:05am

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KreyaArshiLover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Loved it
ThanuAditya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Awesome upd ! Jealously game is alwayzz sweet but want Khushi to get jealous too plz ?! 

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-DobByDoDgeR- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Love the update hun
Keep it up
End notes always makes me nostalgic

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deeswarna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
that was awesome! i never gave it a thought that nanhe and chote  means the same thing! thx for pointing this out!

totally loved this ff, i mean its light and entertaining! its not like i dunt like the other ff which are heavily loaded with drama and romance but once its in a while (like every 2-3 days, lol) reading something as entertaining and hilarious as this one usually makes my week even more brighter and manages to keep me smiling for a long time after reading ur update, so a big thx for that:)

truly nk and la would have made a very special couple, i was so wishing to see them on the show, the ph should have made a re-entry for la when nk was there, it would have been fun watching their courtship and maybe with arnav and khushi playing matchmakers for them. poor nk, he was left without any love interest!

lol akash seems to know so many things about payal gupta, wondering whether she is not the reason he has been flying so frequently to lucknow!

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