Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

ArHi SS: An Apate Affair#2, *Completed* (Page 49)

mishti_17 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 November 2009
Posts: 28536

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Amazing update Saiyyu..

These two are dramebaaz and the biggest nautanki's... LOL No one wants to take the blame and ending up praising each other. Ha ha.. Yeh toh bass yeh dono hee kar saktey hai.. LOL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


neverbefore Goldie

Joined: 08 December 2011
Posts: 2283

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Good luck with the breaking up part Arnav. I have a feeling there's no way on this earth that his family are going to accept these two breaking up!!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Maddy1270 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 January 2012
Posts: 3562

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
arnav's mcp attitude and insistence comes as no surprise! love khushi for standing up to arnav in the face of his blackmail and insisting that she would be the one to break up with him, thus keeping her self-respect intact! akash's level-headedness is a boon... kudos to him for cooling down tempers by suggesting a mutual breakup!
Arnav had also insisted on having a script in place before executing the drama. But Khushi had told him she could cite many dialogues from many films about the importance of immortal love but she didn't know any dialogues about break-ups. So she had suggested improvisation and he had to agree... these lines aptly bring out their contrasting characters: while arnav plans everything and is by the book, khushi is more spontaneous... imagine breaking up on the score of bad pakoras LOL! even khushi's deliberate attempts at making inedile pakoras are doomed to failure... the whole breakfast table convo was damn hilarious! the two frantically searching for a reason to fight results in them looking as if they were whispering sweet notthings in each other's ears! each trying to escape the blame for the supposed breakup, followed by gushing praises of the other just slew me... despite their misgivings about what the other said, I believe they inadvertently revealed their innermost feelings here... "I was fighting with him... Because he hasn't said I love you yet" She spoke with mock shyness. Arnav choked on his juice and looked at her with shock. She openly smiled and discreetly winked at him. khushi exacting revenge on arnav was poetic... can't wait to see how he wriggles out of this one! if this is the way they go about breaking up, won't be long before they find themselves hitched ROFL!
agree a 100% with all the points you wrote in the note... amazed at how similar our mindsets are! of course, I did force myself to watch the show to its abrupt conclusion for sanaya and barun made even the most outlandish scenes look natural!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Apoorvarani IF-Dazzler

Joined: 22 May 2012
Posts: 4841

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Superb Update!!!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


applesauce. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 February 2010
Posts: 13760

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged

I am still giggling over this funny chapter.LOL

Loved their argument in the beginning about the breakup.And Akash joining in with the idea of mutual breakup.

The entire setup for the mutual breakup went funnily wrong.LOL
Arnav and Khushi mutturing within themselves at first,Arnav lost at words and then Akash throwing them a point.Then what followed was so hilarious,faking,accusing and forming jalebi out of the whole thingROFL

Loved the way you have used the dialogues,,it just makes it all the more appealing.Embarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


ChitraF IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 August 2011
Posts: 11544

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Amazing update...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


--BumbleBee-- Goldie

Joined: 14 May 2012
Posts: 1227

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
I loved this chapter..
Loved loved loved it..

This was one of my favourite scenes in the show. It showed Khushi's character in all her glory. In the last few weeks, they made a mockery out of that. It was like she was a different person..

I couldn't imagine the Khushi who tried collecting DNA samples from her husband and his alleged son as the same person who challenged ASR's principles.

Enough about the show..

I'm loving Akash. 
The ab kya bolun was so adorable. Made me want to hug Arnav then.. 

Can't wait to see how the story is gonna proceed.. 

Please update soon.

P.S. Can we get the scene about the stars? 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Kritianya IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 October 2010
Posts: 3967

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
beautiful update
what will be the arnavs answer???
bechara sach me bura pasa
bomb nahi khushi ne atom bomb gira diya
cant wait for nxt update
cont soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Arhi os:Khushi's chalenge to Arnav for arhi sangeet

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: Hina69   Replies: 94   Views: 52509

Hina69 94 52509 13 October 2016 at 2:18am by arnavmaan

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: Hina69   Replies: 94   Views: 60559

Hina69 94 60559 24 September 2016 at 5:29am by NPKN
ArHi SS: An Apate Affair Th#3, *Completed*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 155 156

Author: Rasgulla_sp   Replies: 1247   Views: 107193

Rasgulla_sp 1247 107193 06 November 2013 at 3:14am by ..Peppermint..
ArHi SS: An Apate Affair# 1; *Completed*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 157 158

Author: Rasgulla_sp   Replies: 1260   Views: 133502

Rasgulla_sp 1260 133502 06 November 2013 at 12:23am by ..Peppermint..
Whisper Arhi SS Last Part Arhi

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: jasminerahul   Replies: 212   Views: 149600

jasminerahul 212 149600 26 January 2012 at 3:08am by meluhan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index