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ArHi SS: An Apate Affair#2, *Completed* (Page 108)

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I apologise from the bottom of my heart, for replying so late..

Thanks for the PMs. Smile


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= Ch 7 =

Constipation! Really!ROFL

How could Arnav come up with such a weird excuse?

.. And I burst out laughing when he said-
"That is why I said severe constipation."ROFL


".. our Di.."
Hayee!

Arnav's cheekiness in the restaurant adds so much hilarity to the whole situation.

" Khushi bitiya lagat hain humhre Arnav bitwa tumhre bootiful feetwa ko zameen par touchwa nehi hone dege"
Oooh!! I love Mamiji's comments so, so much.

Mamaji is hilarious too, when he said that by lifting Mano up, he doesn't wish to die a premature death.

Does Anjali have to cry for even at a simple display of romance also? Duh!

I loved Shyam's line here, after Anjali asked him to learn about Romance from Chote-
" All because he is not married "

Raizada family mein Stand-up comedians ki koi kami nehi hain.ROFL

About the Note.

Trip and Fall and Catch and Stare and Eyelock Sequence was one of the best enjoyable things in the show.

You have very well captured the sequence.Clap


Edited by greenMoss - 20 April 2013 at 12:00am
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= Ch 8 =

The bickerings of Arnav and Khushi over who will dump whom was humourous.

"Why don't you stage a mutual
break-up ?"

Akash can draw very good Peace Treaties.Big smile

Fighting over bad pakoras and then break up is the most goofy idea by Akash!

" These are the best pakoras I have ever had. How am I supposed to fight with you now?.. "
Seriously, that must have been a very big problem for Arnav!ROFL

Mamiji's comments are Super Awesome!

It was funny to read that how Akash tried to back up in their Break-up Drama, but he got glares in return.

Arnav and Khushi , both came up with very odd reasons for the break-up.
.. And the drama that followed was hilarious!

The awesome dialogue of the Holi episode was great here.

Arnav thought that he would play cool and stay non-chalant.

But Khushi's unexpected bombardment was too good!

About the Note

You have described Khushi's daring spirit and her sense of right and wrong very beautifully.

In that resignation letter sequence, I loved the ".. Bhaad mein jaaye dialogue" too.


Edited by greenMoss - 20 April 2013 at 12:23am
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= Ch 9 =

The meeting was more about the usual quarel of Arnav and Khushi rather than discussing about the designs.

Akash must have been thoroughly stumped after Arnav asked him that why he doesn't work, while being in Lucknow.
Sweet revenge by Arnav for over-playing Cupid in Arnav's life.

Akash is pretty fast to realize that his Payal is Khushi's sister- Payal GUPTA!
With Mamiji being such a sweet person, the fact that Payal is Khushi's sister has to be good news for Akash!Wink

The way you described why each and every person except Khushi, groaned after listening about NK's Arrival, for their own reasons, was Great!Clap

Arnav getting green with jealousy because of NK, is a Treat to read.

So, NK isn't all goofy.. He has a creative brain too which is eager to make Lavanya jealous!
This is an ajeeb couple- they are trying to grab each other's attention without knowing that they are already the focal point of each other's attention.

I just burst out laughing when NK suggested to call Khushi "Sweetheart" and Arnav asked him to call her "Bhabhi"..

About the Note.

I felt that it was all about wrong timing- Lavanya's exit and NK's entry..
.. And the similarities of dimples, broken Hindi and other profound traits in their characters, getting together as a couple, would have been delightful to watch..

I'm glad to read them as a couple.


Edited by greenMoss - 20 April 2013 at 12:48am
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= Ch 10 =

It was so typical of Khushi to fry Jaleibis.

It was humourous to read how Khushi started to describe Arnav and later said that she was talking about the Jaleibis.

" I HAD to talk to you. I couldn't sleep.. Gardening did not help me at all.. knowing.. knowing that you were upset with me"
Oooh! So Arnav was sleepless!

It cracked me up when Arnav asked Khushi to make Jaleibis of his name only.ROFL
Possessiveness Galore.

Arnav licked the corner of her mouth. Wow!

Khushi snuggled up more to Arnav while Arnav ran his fingers through her long hair.. And they were telling that they need to break up.
They have reached the heights of being weird, Seriously!

About the Note.

I like the way how you bring out the everyday nuances of the show (for eg. Their hobbies, their eccentricities, certain dialogues,etc.), so beautifully, in this story.Clap

The way you brought out how their respective hobbies matched their persona , was Great.

The description of the Arnavified Jaleibi was Awesome!


Edited by greenMoss - 20 April 2013 at 1:39am
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You killed me with the last line!

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WOWWIIIEEE AGEN.. THYRE SOOO FUNNY YET SOOO ADORABLEEE... YAYYY BUAJI SAW THEM.. NOW THE RAIZADAS N GUPTAS WUD END UP GETTN OUR ROYALLLYYY IDIOTIC ADORABLEST COUPLE GET MARRIED.. WWOOPIIEE... HEEHEE

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