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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Guys, this is my first OS... 


It all started with a fight….

Yuvreen in campus…

Y: topper, tu mera phone kyu nahi utha rahi hai??

S:yuvraj, wo muje abhi RC sir se baat karni hai, urgent hai aur important bhi..

Y: (angrily) to kya main important nahi hu??

S: (softly) nahi yuvraj, aisi baat nahi hai.. main 2 minute main aapna kaam khatam karke aati hu ok?

 Looks angrily at her

S: ok tumhe do minute baad canteen main milti hu..

Yuvi goes from there.. even suvi goes..

In boys Hostel..

Yuvraj throws his mobile phone on the Bed…

Y: Hadd hai yaar.. ye topper ke paas mere liye time hi nai hai.. Ha main jaanta hu uske liye uska career important hai.. to kya main important nahi hu??

Rathi : Bhai.. aap tension naa lo.. suvreen ko jarrur kuch prblm rahi hogi.. isliye aapse baat nai kar payi hogi..

Mannu: Rathi sahi keh raha hai Bhai..

Y:main jaanta hu…par thoda sa samay to nikal hi sakti mere liye…

Scene change..

Suvi enters in the canteen… Annie and Naro are also there…

Suvi is very sad. Annie notices this and ask her..

A: kya hogaya suvi tu itni udaas??

N: ha ha kya hua? Yuvi see zajda ho gaya kya??

S: (sadly) ha yaar… aajkal ye fashion course ke itne saare assignments hote hai ki.. main hum dono ko tym nai de paati..

A: ha sacchi main..aur ye Ira mam bhi kuch jyada hi assignments deti hai..

N:Hmmm… toh suvi tuje use jakar maafi maangi chahiye..

S:haa.. par Yuvi mera phone bhi nahi utha raha.. kabse try kar rahi hu..ab tumlog hi mujse kuch idea dedo…

 

A: mere paas ek idea hai

S:kya..kya jaldi bata…

N: ha annie ab bata bhi de..

A: kyu na tu aur yuvi date pe jao…

N:that's good idea…Issi bahane tum dono ek dusre ko tym de paoge…

S:Thank you Annie Naro.. main abhi jaake humare Date ki taiyari karti hu…Byeee..

A & N: byee Suvi..All the Best!!

Suvi books a table in hotel…She plans a beautiful dinner… so tht they can spend the time together

Suvi sends a msg to yuvi

In boys Hostel…

"Beep beep" a sound came from yuvi's mobile ..

Yuvi reads the msg " Royal Caf @ 7 pm . I will be waiting for you"

R: kiska msg hai.. bhai??

Y: topper ka

R:kya kaha?

Y: Caf main bula rahi hai… par  Main nahi jaunga…

R :to bhai jao.. isse accha mauka aapko nahi milega.. aapka dono ko time spend karne ka bahana bhi milega

Yuvi decides to go..

At the Caf entrance…

Yuvi comes in a nice black Tshirt…looking dashing as usual….

Y:ye topper kaha hai.. muje yahan bulake khud kaha gayi ….

Suvi in red beautiful  gown comes from behinds and puts a blindfold on yuvi…

Y:topper topper, tu ye kya kar rahi hai…

S: chalo to sahi …..

Y: arre par bata to sahi kaha lekar ja rahi hai muje…

Yuvreen  comes near the table…. And Suvi opens the blindfold….Yuvi slowly opens his eyes and sees on the table…" SORRY" was wriiten with rose petals and then suvi holds her ears and says Sorry very lovingly. Yuvi smiles and remove her hands from ears… And He gently kisses her on her Forehead and says…

Y: Topper, main tumhe khona nahi chahta.. jab bhi hum milte nahi hai to muje bahut bura lagta aur ajeeb sa  lagta .. Topper tu mujse aise door mat raha kar… muje accha nahi lagta..

S:Yuvraj main jaanti hu.. main tumhe promise karti hu.. Main har roj milungi..

Both hugs each other.

Yuvi makes suvi sit on the chair … and then he sits..

Y: waise topper tumne to saare attiquetes hi change kar diye…

S:matlab??

Y: hamesha ladka ladki ko date pe le jaate hai.. par yahan to ladki ladke ko date pe le aayi hai… (Laughs)

S: (Laughingly)ha ha ha… pyaar main kya kya karna padta hai.. waise ye Annie and naro ka idea tha..

Y: ha ha ha … kaafi accha idea diya hai…

They both had a pleasant dinner…   and then yuvi drops suvi home in his laila…

S:byee yuvraj.. kal milenge college main..

Y:waise terko chodkar jaane ka maan to nahi kar raha par….

S: (holding his hands)yuvraj.. hum kal mil rahe hai hmm…

Y:Hmm… byee

Suvi gives him a hug and goes… Yuvi is standing watching her… after waking few steps she turns back and gives a flying kiss to him….. Yuvi catches it and keeps in his pocket gives a smile….

                                                                                  THE END 


Note: Please dont throw andas and tamatars if you didnt like it LOL

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 5:30am | IP Logged
hey this is just too cute...loved ur 1st attmpt...thnks so much for this lovely n pakka walla cute os Smile

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Really Good! Update the next soon...

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 5:43am | IP Logged
It's super cool loved itSmile

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hotncold

Really Good! Update the next soon...

Dear.. its a small story wouldnt be continuing further  

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrins

Originally posted by hotncold

Really Good! Update the next soon...

Dear.. its a small story wouldnt be continuing further  


awww... Okay...

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Aree it ws ausm. No tamatars n andas. Jst chocolates...

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hotncold

Originally posted by mrins

Originally posted by hotncold

Really Good! Update the next soon...

Dear.. its a small story wouldnt be continuing further  


awww... Okay...

Smile But will write another OS when I will get time Approve

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