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Thorns of destiny&love Th2 Epilogue (Page 61)

sruthick IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Muskaan s alive...!!!
Wow... Nice update...Cntinue soon

pinky89 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Nice update !!!
VYGA89 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Amazing update.
Loved it.
Punkin22 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Marvelous update.  Feeling so sorry for Muskaan.  No one knows her not even Khushi.  Eyes never change or hair.  Look forward to next update.
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 12:01am | IP Logged

Thorns of destiny and love Part 27

I thank LaxshaLOVEArshi for making such a lovely banner for my FF.

Arnav and Khushi go to Dr.Priya's house.

Muskaan run to them with excitement.

Mus:I knew that you both will come.But Dev'why did'nt he come?

Arn:Why should Dev come to meet Kripa Sharma?

She is shocked.

Arn:You are Dr.Priya's sister.Right?But why are you playing this drama?

M:Please believe me.I am not Kripa.2 years back Kripa died in an accident.Dr.Priya gave me her face and named me Kripa when I had memory loss.

Arn:You are so good at cooking stories.

M:Enough Arnav.You are always piercing my heart.But when Priya di comes back you will come to know the truth.

Arn:Why should we wait for her to return?You can call her.Right?


Muskaan tried to phone Priya.But the call does'nt get connected.

M:Not able to contact her.

Arnav smirked:Again pretension.One thing we want to know.Why are you pretending to be Muskaan?You don't need money as you are a rich girl.Then why are you playing this dirty game?

M:Stop it Arnav.Wait for one month.I will bring Priya di to Raizada house.No need to come here till my identity is proved.

Arnav smiles:Ok.

Arnav and Khushi walk away.Muskaan cries.Khushi turns back with pain.Her heart pains seeing her cry.

Khushi thinks:Why my heart is paining for Kripa like my heart used to pain for my Muskaan?

Dev is standing at the mall.Muskaan passes by.Dev feels her fragrance in the air.

D:Muskaan!She is here'

He turns back.Muskaan is not there.He rund around to search for Muskaan.Suddenly his eyes met Muskaan.


He goes near her.She does'nt know that he is behind her.Her hair blows in the air and falls on his face.He smells her hair.

He thinks:Same smell'Muskaan's smell'

Muskaan turns back.She is shocked to see Dev.She is surprised.She becomes emotional.


Dev becomes emotional.

Muskaan caresses his face.He remembers Muskaan caressing his face in the past.He is lost in Muskaan's touch.Slowly his fingers touched her face.A very emotional touch.
They both share an emotional eye lock.
Suddenly seeing her face he gets confused and moves backward.Muskaan becomes upset.

M:Dev'why are you going away?Still you can't believe that I am your Muskaan?
Dev's eyes were wet,but he kept quiet.
M:If you can't believe me,I am willing for a DNA test.Tell some thing Dev.

Dev walks away faster.Muskaan cries.Dev turns back.He sees her cry and becomes upset.

Dev goes back home.

Muskaan gets Priya online after trying a lot.She explains everything to her shedding tears.Priya feels upset.

P:Don't cry Muskaan.I will come there soon.

M:What about your classes?

P:My classes are not more important than you my dear.If I can save your life that makes me more happier than my career.

Muskaan weeps:Thank you di.

Khushi notices Dev's dull face.

K:Dev..are you ok?Why do I feel that something had happened when you went to the mall last saturday?Since then you look different.

D:You are right Khushi.I saw Muskaan.

Khushi gets excited:What?You saw our Muskaan?

D:I mean Kripa Sharma.

Khushi's face becomes dull.

K:Dev'.why did you call Kripa Muskaan?Do you think she is our Muskaan?

D:I don't know.But definetly she reminds me of my Muskaan.Same eyes'same smell'same touch'When she is near me I feel Muskaan's presense.

Khushi becomes emotional:Your heart says that she is Muskaan.But your brain says that she is Kripa.Right Dev?

Dev does'nt say anything.

Arnav comes hearing their conversation.

K:Then you listen to your heart Dev.

Dev looks at Khushi carefully.

Arn:What rubbish are you saying Khushi?

K:Yes Arnav.If Dev is feeling like this she is Muskaan only.

Arn:Oh Khushi'

K:Sometimes we need to listen to our heart Arnav.
A:Nonsense.Dev Bhai...She is Kripa.
D:If she is Kripa why did she agree for DNA test?
Arnav was confused.
D:She wants to prove that she is her father's daughter.So that we all will accept her.How much trouble she has to face because of us?No...I can't let her suffer anymore.
Khushi smiles.
Khushi looks at Dev:Dev'you go to your Muskaan.Don't be late.Again you should not be separated from Muskaan.


Anand:Arnav'.Khushi can't be wrong.That day when I saw Muskaan I was numb and confused.But I am her father.How can I not recognize my daughter?

Arn:Dadiji...what do you mean?You think she is Muskaan?

Anand:Yes Arnav.I can't go wrong.

Dev feels happy and runs out without thinking twice.

Arnav does'nt react.

Edited by jasminerahul - 23 April 2013 at 12:03am

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pakpearl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Tongue..OMG...I can't believe it !!! the 1st comment is mine I m so habitual of reading n commenting so late !!!

Jasmine,i've fallen short of words...u've woven the story so delicately...Identical twin sisters...going 2 marry is falling 4 her would be jiju...forcing her sis to withdraw...marrying him...

 n now,she's back with a new face(thanx 4 using Neha's faceSmile)

...khushi n Dev can feel Muskaan's pain...I hope they'll bring her home soon...

I loved Arhi holi scenes !!!!! Big smile 

Jasmine,u deserve a tight hug n Clap

Edited by pakpearl - 23 April 2013 at 12:50am

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riafna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Do DNA test too even Priya revealed everything Arnav still have doubts..that seeds won't go until it clear correctly..otherwise Muskaan will surely suffer more...She suffered lot now.
Superb update
Thanks for pm in advanceLOL

Edited by riafna - 23 April 2013 at 12:45am

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mandy15 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged

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