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Thorns of destiny&love Th2 Epilogue (Page 45)

NestleToulouse IF-Stunnerz

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Nice update!! Thank you so much for the PM dear! Hug

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just caught up with the last4 chapters

roller coaster

Muskaan and Dev is reunited and then they are separated
again when she is ambushed by thieves
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update
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Thorns of destiny and love Part 25

Due to public demand I am giving Neha Bamb's face to Muskaan

I thank LaxshaLOVEArshi for making such a lovely banner for my FF.
I have written a romantic sensuous Holi scene for Arhi.Please give your review.

All are celebrating Holi.

Karthi went near Dev with colour powder.

Kar:Happy Holi Dev beta..

She is about to colour his cheek.

D:No mom.I will celebrate Holi only when Muskaan returns.

Karthi becomes upset:Dev,try to understand.Muskaan is not going to come back.

D:Stop it mom.Muskaan will come back.Till then please leave me alone.

Karthi goes out painfully.She sees Shravan looking at her.With a smile she colours his cheek:Happy Holi Shravan.

Sh:Happy Holi Dadi.Dadi..I really miss mumma.In Nainital we used to celebrate Holi together.We had so much of fun.

Karthi becomes upset.Pari came running.She pulls Shravan's hand.
P:Come on Bhai.Let us play with colours.
Sh:But Pari...
P:Bhai,won't you play with me?
Shravan cannot make his sister upset.
They both run to the play ground.Karthi smiles.
Shravan and Pari put colour powder on each other laughing.
Aarav bursts into your face looks like.You look like a funny clown.

P:Don't laugh too much bhai.Even your face looks funny.Full of colour.
They both laugh.

Khushi looks at everyone enjoying Holi.Shravan and Pari were pouring colour water on each other with coloured water gun.Khushi stands away from them as since Muskaan left she is not into any celebration.

Suddenly Arnav came and put colour on her cheeks.She gets a shock.

K:Arnav!What did you do?Don't you know that I don't like all these?

Arnav becomes upset about Khushi's sudden burst out.Khushi walks away.Suddenly she becomes guilty of talking like this to Arnav as she feels his pain.She thought:Oh!What did I tell him?Hiw could I talk like this to my Arnav.He must be hurt.
She goes near him.

K:I am sorry Arnav.I lost my control.Since childhood I have been celebrating Holi with Muskaan.Wthout her I don't feel like celebrating it.
She cupped his face in her hands:Please don't feel bad.

He holds her hand and walked to a private room.

He holds her hand softly:Khushi,I can understand your feelings.But do you think Muskaan will be happy seeing you in this state?


A:She would be really upset if she sees you leading a colourless life.Where ever Muskaan is if you want her to be happy you should not stay away from the colours of life.

Khushi's eyes become wet.


He wipes her tears.He caresses her face:Khushi,I did'nt say this to make you upset.But I want my Khushi to be cheerful like before.

She feels upset.

He goes.She calls him:Arnav!

He looks at her.She goes near him and rubs his cheek with her cheek.Her cheek becomes really colourful as her cheek's colour gets transferred to his cheek due to her rubbing act.He touches his cheek happily looking at her romantically.She blushes.

K:Happy Holi'
He smiles.
They run to the celebration area holding hands together and join others in dancing.They dance romantically.
Then they dance with Pari and Shravan.Khushi enjoys a lot dancing.
He watches her dance with a smile.Unexpectedly he carries her
and puts her in the pool of colours.She gets shocked.He jumps to the pool.She gets thrilled.They both get drenched in the colourful water.They both were completely coloured.

After some time they both run to their room.He places her on the bed and covers her with his body.After their romantic session Khushi's body colour is on Arnav's body and Arnav's body colour is on Khushi.They both realize it with shyness.

Another area'.Holi celebration is going on.

A young lady is walking and looking at others play with colours.She is not able to enjoy Holi because of her circumstance.She is gloomy.Pain is evident on her face.
Her eyes are wet:They all are so happy with their family members.But I am detached from my family.
She does'nt remember anything about her past.When she woke up from her sleep she was in a hospital under Dr.Priya's treatment.Though she tried her best to recollect her past she could'nt do that.But Dr.Priya had told her that a mangalsuthra was found on her neck.From that she knew that she was married.But she did not know who her husband was.Dr.Priya was kind enough to give her accommodation in her house.She treats her as her own sister and named her Kripa;her dead sister's name.It's been a year'still she does'nt know her own identity.

Dev is in a beautiful dream world.He saw Muskaan near him.He was surprised.She coloured his cheek.
D:Where were you Muskaan?You know how much I missed you?
M:Don't be upset Dev.I will never leave you again.
He smiled and coloured Muskaan's face .They both start dancing.
Suddenly he wakes up from his sleep.


His eyes are wet.

D:Where are you Muskaan?I know that you are alive.But then why don't you come back?

Somebody threw colour water on Kripa.She is shocked.She feels that her head is spinning.She feels that somebody is calling her 'Muskaan'.She is familiar with that voice.She tries to recollect the voice.Slowly she can view Dev's voice.

Her lips shivers:Dev!Dev'.

She becomes very emotional.Her past comes into her mind.

Priya goes near her:Kripa!

Kripa is excited:Priya di'I am Muskaan.

Priya is confused:What?

K:Yes.Now I remember my past.

Priya is surprised:What?


They both go to their house.Accidently Muskaan views her face on the mirror.

She is shocked.She touches her face:How did my face change?

Priya becomes upset:Muskaan'I did'nt tell you one thing.I thought it would make you upset.That's why I hid it from you.

M:What's what di?

P:When you were saved from the river by some people and brought to the hospital yoir face was disfigured.So you underwent a strong plastic surgery.I gave you my dead sister Kripa's face.

Muskaan is shocked.

P:Your face made me feel that my sister is alive.That's why I called you Kripa.

Muskaan is upset:Will my family believe me when they see my present face?

P:They all love you very much.Then how can they not recognize you?

Muskaan smiles.

P:Tomorrow I am leaving to US for some meducal classes.I will return only after a month.That time you can go back to your house.

She smiles.

The next day after Priya left Muskaan rushed to Raizada house.

She rang the calling bell.Khushi opend the door.Muskaan gets excited.


She hugs Khushi.

M:I missed you a lot.

Khushi is confused:Who are you?

Muskaan comes back to reality.She realizes the trouble caused by her new face.

Edited by jasminerahul - 18 April 2013 at 1:24am

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riafna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Muskaan alive. Dev bring her back.
Today first time in my life I like Dev with Sanaya that holi picture.
And there goes her face changed
Again testing period for Daan
Beautiful update
Thanks for pm

Edited by riafna - 18 April 2013 at 1:57am
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aw so sad.thanks for the pm

Edited by SobtianluvLG - 18 April 2013 at 1:57am
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged
part 23
lovely part...
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:52am | IP Logged
nice  update dear:)

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