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                    Part 4
Asad sees zoya...she was looking gorgeous in the pink saaree...it reminded him of the bol Na halke Halke wala scene.
He smiled and started walking towards her...
she was standing near the window..with the moonlight falling on her making her more beautiful..
Z: Toh! Mr. Khan...Kaisa laga mera surprise?
A:.Its very beautiful ( He looked around the room n then looked back at her..)..But not as beautiful as u..
This made zoya blush...
A:..toh are u prepared zoya?..
Z:.yes Mr.khan ofcourse i am prepared..Main aapki tarah Slow todhi hoon...Aaj main aapko I..I...I mean woh 3 words bol ke hi rahoongi..
( well she knew it was not that easy for her to say So...but as u know our Zoya is SuPerSmart..)
Asad grinned sensing her nervousness
A:Toh aapko mujhe kuch kehna hai Zoya?..
Z:..Nahi mr. kHan...No i mean yes Mr.khan...woh mujhe 
she turned away not facing him..
Asad *mind voice*...Yes miss farooqi bhi na...Apne aap ko bahot smart samjati hain...But she doesnt knows ki when people are in love unki saari smartness nikal jaati hai..
Zoya *mind voice* Mr. Khan mujhe Darpok samaj rahein honge..main unse woh 3 words bhi nahi keh paa rahi...Allah miyan wats wrong wid me..
No Zoya u cant be so crazy...Bhale woh mujhse pyaar karte hain per phir bhi woh mujhe niicha dekhane ka ek bhi mauka nahi chodenge..I have to do this...
She gathers courage and turns to face him..
he was just behind her waitng for her lady love to confess her love for him..
She turns-looks at him-..looses her confidence..
she agains turns back..
Asad smiles...
Zoe*mind voice*..OMG!!..Have i gone mad..Why can i just not say it?..
A:..Its ok Zoya..I understand how difficult it is..
Its totally fine if u cant say it..(though he wanted her to say)...I know that U ..
He Holds her hand...N pulls her towards him...N whispers in her ears..
A:..I know that u love me..
Zoya smiles n her cheeks go red...
Zoe* she closes her eyes..*..
*mind voice*..This man loves me so much...Y cant i reciprocate that love..
Asad switches on the music player ...
He brings her more close to him..and holds her waist,he takes her hand n places on his shoulder...
Zoya's eyes still closed...
The song started..
"Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte.
   Tere bina kya wajoood mera." { zoya had edited this song and after every line there was a puase in the lyrics and only tune was played..}
Asad and Zoya moved in the rhythm of the song ...they were dancing very gracefully..
Asad was staring at zoya... admiring her beauty.
Right then..
Z:( in a low voice)When i decided for leaving for US..I myself was very Sad..I did not wanted to go...both foofi and najma tried to stop me but their words did not affect my decision...But i still wanted to stay..I wanted to wait...but for whom..It was U
I didn't want to be away from u...I was not aware of this Feeling but i just wanted u stop me once.. .
Asad was surprised...He really did not expected this...he was Happy ..very happy..
"Tujhse juda agar ho jayenge toh
  khud se hi hojayenge Juda.."
Asad's eyes were fixed at zoya...he tightened his grip on her waist n turned her and his hand was now touching her bare stomach..n his hand was now tracing the path of goosebumps on her hand..
Z:.Why is this so mr.khan..?..
A:.( in a heavy husky voice..) wat zoya?..
Z:..When u touch me...It creates a fire in body...It creates a sensation a Buring sensation...whenever u come close to me..my heartbeats get so louder that u must have heard them many a times...y does ur single touch is so effective to me..Why?..
(she smiles..Asad smiles too..)
"Kyunki tum hi ho,
  Ab tum hi ho ..
  meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho.."
she turns back n hugs him tightly...
Z:..I Love u Mr.khan ..I love U..( she kinda screams this)
Asad's happiness had no boundaries now..he was hell happy...
He lifted her up and swirled her around ...
A:.I love Zoya...I love u too...
Z:..Asad..get me down..oh! boy dont get lost..Plz bring me down..
Asad lays her on the bed..and rests next to her...
both were laughing and breathing hard( they had danced a lot)..
Asad catches zoya's hand and plants a kiss there..
zoya smiles..
he slids closer to her...and caress her face 
A:..This is the bestest day of my life.Thank u so much zoya for making my life so beautiful...
Z:.This is the bestest day of my life too...Bhale aap akdu ho per ho toh mere hi..
Asad smirks...
A:..accha bacchu...Abhi batata hoon.
zoya get up n starts running around the bed...asad chases her..
she jumps on her bed..
A:.Zoya..bed per nahi..ganda ho jayega..
zoya steps down..
Z:..apko bed ki padi hai..?
asad gets there and instead of catching her..he starts cleaning the bed...
zoya gets angry..she is about say somthing..but then he pulls her..
A:.Aapko kya laga..aapko itni aasani se jaane doonga..
    Arz kiya hai...
zoya gets shocked...she did not know that he will ever do Shayari..
A:..Bistar saaf karna ..
    Bistar saaf karna 
   toh bas ek bahana tha..
   asal mein toh..
  hume aapke kareeb aana tha..
he smiles..
zoya laughs...
A:.aap hass kyu rahi hain?..i know it wasn't that good..but better than ur's atleast..
zoya pushes him away...and begins to run..
Z:..Aap mujhe nahi pakad sakte...cheating karne per bhi nahi..
she gets out..in the garden..asad chasing her..
A:..I'll get u girl..
The weather out was amazing..the wind was blowing and the clouds thundering...
finally he catches her..
A:..i got u..
Z:.(smiles)..I belong to u..
It started raining but none of them bothered to get inside...
asad  puts both of his hand on her waist..n gets her closer to him..
He asides the hair falling on her face..n brings his lips closer to hers...
Both closed their eyes..


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Ok guys...so here it is the Last Part..
Hope u all like it..
Plz ignore the mistakes..and plz like and comment..
This is my last post in the forum as i will be leaving for my Hostel today..!!
So Hasta la vista guys..!!..
And yes..Thanks for ur immense support!!

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Originally posted by kritzzz_ArSha

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Thanks Yaar!!.
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
I guess this part is not upto ur expectations..
that is why No comments..Unhappy?
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1D_D3-Crazy

Cute update :-) loved the Ayaan-Asad conversation and also how Asad was gesturing Zoya to say no to go
Thanks...glad u liked it..
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:31am | IP Logged
woah that was awesome
Asad ka shayari i have to say wah wah 
lol when he was cleaning the bed i thought ye kabhi nahi suderega but your proved me wrong the very next moment 
it was a nice part with such a cute confession 
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
awesome part!! Bt why d last one?? Bt it is realy good! Thnx 4 d pm!

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loved zoya's confession part.Heart..the way zoya was getting nervous but finally she said the three magical words was so sweet...song selection was really good..it suited them perfectlyDay Dreaming...all in all it was beautiful part.ClapClap..do write more...Smile

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