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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
Aaahhh. Tooo gooodd!!!!! Amazing loved it:)

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MrDarcyfan

I loved this OS! Please do continue and show us Zoya's confession too!
yes wait for few hours..Smile
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                                   Part 3
Asad realised what she was doing and his heart broke...
He turned away from her and moved in the opposite direction...suddenly someone came n hugged him from behind...his heart very well recognised who she was..

Zoya and asad reached home..
dilshad and najma were suprised..whereas Tanveer was shocked..( 440 volt ka jhatka)
D:..Zoya!!..ur back...i just cant believe..
N:..Wow..(she hugs zoya)...I m so happy ...Thank god u r back..
(looks at zoya)..bhaijaan aap zoya ko wapas ke kar aayen hain?
eveyone focuses on Asad...
He gets worried ...wat should he answer...If he says yes...then he has to come up with an explanation...
zoya looks at him...n winks..an gives him "main sab samhal loongi" wala expression..

Z:..Inho ne toh bas mujhe Yahan tak drop kiya hai...wapas aane ka decision toh mera tha..
Asad..*mind voice*:..Ek no. ki jhuuti hai...agar main na hota toh abhi to flight mein hoti...
( he smiles to himself)
D:...Accha kiya jo wapas aa gayi...Hum tumhe abhi se miss kar rahe the...
N:..toh ammi zoya bhi hamare saath chalegi na?..
Asad got tensed...before zoya ask wat they were talking about...
( Najma n dilshad...shocked..)..
zoya coughed puposely to make him corrrect his mistake..
A:I mean ..Miss faroqui..( N and D relived)..ko ab kahan jaana hai?..
D:..woh asad aaj mere friend ki beti ka nikah hai...so they have invited all of us..toh pehle me,najma N tanveer were going ab zoya bhi aa jayegi...
Hai na zoya?
Z:( she looks at AAk...he signals her to say No) Yes foofi...ofcourse i will come( grins).
A:."Mind voice"..Yeh ladki bhi...She drives me Crazy..
N: Ok zoya...go n get ready we will be leaving in next 1 hour..

asad enters his room..he had no chance to spend time with her Lady love Zoya...It seemed to him that the whole world had surrounded her ..n stopping him to meet her..
He lays on his bed...he closes his eyes and recollects all the moments spent with zoya few hours ago..a BIG smile covered his face...
Meanwhile his phone rings...he didnt see the caller's name n assumed it to zoya..
A:..accha toh finnaly time mil gaya aapko mujhse baat karne ka...
It was aayan on the line...He got suprised...n was about to laugh but he controlled it as it wanted to listen asad's words..
A:..ab aap kuch bolengi bhi?..
No response
A:..zoya..Kya hua..?..Hello..
Ok now everything was clear in aayan's mind..
AY:Aakhikar bhaijaan aapne zoya se apne dil ki baat keh hi di...
Asad was shocked...he looks at his cell...it was aayan's call..
A:..Ayaan tum...woh ayaan i thought its...its..
Ay: Its ok bhaijaan...i don't need any explanation...Just tell me how do u feel now?.
A:Iska matlab u knew my feelings for her?..
Ay:Yup bhaijaan..i also knew that zoya also likes u..
A:Abey..toh bataya kyu nahi...
Ay:pehle aap mere question ka jawab dijiye..
A:in the begining as u know i didnt believed in Love n all.but now..i feel that it exists..N for me love is zoya...
Shayad main kabhi yeh usse keh nahi paata but i just couldnt see her leave...N this made me make this move..
he narrates ayaan the whole story...
AY:I m proud of u Bhaijaan...waise bhabhijaan ne aapko I love u kaha ya nahi?..
A:.( he smiles on the word Bhabhijaan)woh kuch kahe ya na kahe..but i know that she likes me..
Ay:uffo bhai...aap kitne dumb ho..
A:.Kyu?..wats wrong?
Ay:bhabhijaan toh badi smart hain...unhone hamare bhai se toh sab bolwaliya...aur aap ek no. ke bhuddu hain...
A:.Oh!...aisi baat hai...tension mat lo Rabart ...hum bhi kam nahi hai...unse ILU toh main bhi bulva hi loonga..
Ayaan wishes him luck n cuts the call...
A:..Miss faroqui be ready..here i come..
he marches towards zoya's room...
Zoya was changing at that time...she was standing in front of the mirror... n trying to close the chain of her suit...but she couldnt..
there was a Thud voice...somebdy locked zoya's room..
Z:Ah!..thank god najma u r here. I am unable to close my chain..help na..
Zoya was unaware that it was asad..
Asad checked her out...she looked extremely pretty in the purple choridar
Z:..Najma ..plz be qiuck...we will be late..
Asad went close to her..
He united her hair n placed it on one side of her shoulder...he caught her waist with one hand creating a burning sensation in her body...
Z:..Asad..( she whispered)
He slowly closed her chain..
Z:..Plz leave me..( her voice was very soft..but audible for his Mr khan..)
but mr khan was in a naughty mood..he placed his second hand on her waist..n pulled her more closer..
But zoya was no less she hits asad with her elbow n makes him fall on her bed..but she had forgotten that he was holding her too..
both fell on zoya's bed..
zoya was lying above him...asad caress her ..he holds her face..
A:..I love u zoya..
no response...she just smiles..
A:..u dont want to say anything..?
Z:..No mr khan
Asad got angry..he got up throwing her down...
Z:Ouch..( she fell on the floor)..
she thought atleast he will pick her up..per aisa kuch nahi hua..
asad opened the door...n looked at her..
A:U are looking very pretty...and smiles n leaves..
he again cums back..
Z:..( she gets up n sees if she was looking good..)
A:..I m going to office now..see u tommorow..bye..
Z:.*mind voice*I know wat he wants..Bas shaam tak ka wait kijiye Mr. Khan...Kal tak toh doori hum bhi nahi seh sakte.
Najma n tanveer leave in one car n dilshad n zoya were about to leave 
D:..chale zoya..
Z:.Foofi..woh mujhe kuch accha nahi lag raha...i think i shoudnt Go..
D:..toh kaam karte hain..i will be here with u..
Z:..Nahi nahi..aap kyu wait karengi..U go foofi..I will be fine..
N dilshad leaves..
Zoya is very happY...

Its around 7 pm...asad returns home hoping to see zoya..but then he remembers that she must have gone to the wedding...
He enters his room...He was suprised seeing his room ,lighten up with the candles..N there were red balloons all around..
he was suprised...N he very well knew who did all this..His eyes for just searching for her ..
n There she was..standing near the window...wearing a long sleeve blouse n a pink n black bordered saari..( the one in bol na halke halke scene)..
she looked extremly pretty... 

Ok guys..
First of all..i m extremely sorry for this delay..!!
I was too busy..and this part maybe not that good...as i didnt get time and have somehow managed to write this so plz bare with the mistakes..
plz like n comments..

Edited by _-NeHa-_ - 11 April 2013 at 4:18am

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Kriti--

thanks kriti..Smile
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 4:24am | IP Logged
hey, who said dat it ws nt gd? It ws jst freaking awsm. Loved it a lot

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AsyaManic

hey, who said dat it ws nt gd? It ws jst freaking awsm. Loved it a lot
Thanks yaar..
well do u want next update soon..i can give it by tommorow

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