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Qubool Hai Fic Untitled (Page 4)

badfaith4u IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Awesome story
Please continue ...
Asad and zoya are so adorable together

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Chapter 4 (Part 2)

All the formalities were done and Zoya and Asad made there way into Asad's SUV both remained silent...Asad didn't know what to say and Zoya didn't speak because she felt unwanted, from what had happened earlier she began thinking that he didn't want to see her and so being lost in her own thoughts she didn't speak. Asad helped her into the car and then they were on their way back home. While driving the only conversation they had was when Asad asked Zoya to call home and inform that they were on their way and when during the journey he had asked if she was comfortable. On both counts she just slightly nodded.

When they reached, Asad helped Zoya get out of the car…she was in awe of what she saw in front of her…the white house in front of her was beautiful it didn't seem that the architect was trying to hard to make the house symbolize wealth…but at the same time the house at least from the outside looked sophisticated and suave. She was a little disappointed because she thought that maybe if she were to see her own house memories would come rushing back like they did in the movies…but that didn't happen…however she did feel the warmth of the house radiating outside…the house was filled with love and acceptance and she could feel it even without stepping inside.


Asad supported her…and they walked into the house…no…they walked into their home.  Before Zoya could even properly look at the interior of the house she was engulfed into a hug by a cute, and a little healthy girl, she had shoulder length hair and large brown eyes that reminded her of someone…maybe Asad…before she knew it she was consoling the girl who had wrapped her arms around her and was now crying…slowly as the weeping died down Zoya slowly pulled away…she didn't know who the girl standing in front of her…but she could feel that in the past they had shared a special bond…Zoya then wiped the girl's tear and said…bas don't cry anymore tamatar…and everyone was shocked just as much as Zoya she quickly covered her mouth and closed her eyes…why did she say that…when she opened her eyes she expected the girl to be angry or at the least a little upset…but instead the girl that was crying some moments ago sported a large smile…she hugged Zoya again but this time less desperately and said Zoya I'm so happy…that you remember me…Bhaijaan and scared us all saying you had forgotten everything…Zoya felt guilty  for a moment she wished she could've remembered because the girl in front of her seemed like an important part of her life…but before she could reply Asad placed a hand on Najma and shook his head slowly indicating that she didn't remember and with that one look conveyed that what had just happened perhaps might have been a fluke. Najma took the hint…and smiled…Zoya I'm you're sister-in-law Najma…we were best friends when you were here…and inshallah we will once again become friends…please don't feel troubled to ask me anything…and don't pressure yourself to remember…maybe this happened for the best…and before Najma could continue Asad gave a slight glare signaling her to shut up…and so she did…Zoya looked at them confusingly…and thought about what Najma said…happened for the best…why was her losing all her memory better…what was hidden in her past that was best to forget but before she could continue with her dwelling Asad put his around her shoulder and guided her inside...towards his ammi who was in the kitchen…she didn't know that they had arrived already and was busy cooking.


When Dilshad turned around she was so happy to see Zoya…she remembered when she had turned on the news…she had been in so much pain and wished that Allah give her all the pain her daughter was in…Zoya was such a good soul…she didn't deserve was life had served her with…she didn't deserve for her mother to have died…she didn't deserve hearing after 20 years that her father…her only hope to understand what had happened on that unfaithful night…was gone…and that she was now alone…a tear slipped down her cheek as she remembered Zoya breaking down in her arms after Asad had helped solve the mystery of her father…Zoya didn't remember the woman she was looking at…but she knew that this had to be Asad's  ammi because there was so much love in her eyes for Zoya…so much motherly affection and before thinking Zoya hugged Dilshad and quietly whispered Ammi. Dilshad felt like all the pain and qualms she had at the point had disappeared…she remembered how much she had wished that Zoya call her Ammi but had decided not to force the relation upon her…but now she was so happy...Asad's eyes were wet…as tears fell from his face…he was so happy…it was like his family was now complete.

P.S - Sorry for the delay...hope y'all enjoy the chapter..



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sammy4u IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
awesome part dear
loved it a lot 
awesome IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it
but its too short part
plz cont soon
chichi220 Goldie

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Wow just luved it they all are made for each other I want them to be ffamily. U are really good can't wait hw things progress
Fimmy IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
The part was beautiful!
Amazingly written...
Thanks for the pm...
Please continue soon...
crazzychips Senior Member

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 11:15am | IP Logged
nice update
loved it
it was totally adorable
anyway aren't you gonna name this ff ?
you made my day today cause i was so happy when i recieved your pm
thanks for the pm dear
update ASAP
can't wait to know what happens next !!!!! :-)
badfaith4u IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
she said tamatar !!!!!

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