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Qubool Hai Fic Untitled (Page 3)

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Hey guys a little change of plans..this is part 1 of chapter 4...part 2 will come out tomorrow!


Chapter 4

Asad returned to the ward he booked a room in a nearby inn for the night...when he came back Zoya was asleep...she must've been exhausted...he sat down next to her and thought about the current was he going to pull this off...they weren't really married and even though he couldn't deny the soft corner he had for Zoya they weren't in love and now he would have to pretend...he felt terrible...maybe if he kept a bit of a distance from her it would be easier for her when she found out the truth...before he knew it exhaustion also took over him and he fell asleep with his head on Zoya's bed in a quite uncomfortable crouched position...He was awoken when he felt a hand stroking through his felt really nice..he felt like a little child in his Ammi's lap...there was a sense of peace...then he came back into reality and realized that he was indeed in someone's lap and someone was touching him with love and was Zoya and it was morning he hadn't returned to inn...Asad slowly got up and stretched a little bit...he could feel her staring at him and he too stole a glance at her she was smiling at him and a warm feeling filled his heart.
The nurse came inside the room and told them she was hear to give Zoya a sponge bath...Asad turned around to leave when Zoya held his hand she looked at him and's ok you're my husband...he slowly took her hand off his and walked out of the room...he couldn't do anything a husband could do because they weren't really married and it would be like taking advantage of her situation. His little gesture didn't matter to him as he had his reasons but Zoya she was oblivious to the truth and for minute her heart ached...why had he left...he was her husband...she was the one with the lost memory so why did he leave...he was her husband they had shared everything least she would think that's what they had done since they were married...the nurse slowly helped her remove her white patient outfit and her eye moved to the scars on her body and the large burn scar especially on her right arm...and then it hit her...he didn't want to see this...maybe he wanted to continue to remember her body as it was and now if he had seen her he would've been disgusted...a tear fell down her cheek...she didn't blame him.

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LuvUAsYa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 3:50am | IP Logged
awww poor zoya!!!!
bdw nicely rittn!!!
plzzz continue sooon!!
im waaitng!!!!

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crazzychips Senior Member

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
this ff is just awesome
superb concept yaar
i just love it
pls update soon
and pls pm me :-)
chichi220 Goldie

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Jus saw this ff awesome is the word can't wait to read more

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
nice one... short n sweet
crazy5 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Nice...very touching n heartwarming...pls update soon
awesome IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged
awesome part
aww poor zoya
plz cont soon
Fimmy IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Wow! This ff is amazing!
Plz plz plzzz cont soon...
Eagerly waiting for next part...

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