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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 97)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Awesome SS ..ek epilogue to banta hai ;)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Sighs... that was just truly beautiful :) But you took your time (And made sure it was worth the read! :D) You know the words that you pen down seem so real that I can truly imagine Arnav and Khushi in the circumstances you're designed for them without having to think, shucks I'm being a stupid fan girl with larger than life fantasies! LOL

Brilliant yaar, you always make me smile whenever I read through the chapters and by the end of this one I had the fondest smile on my face! :D

Arnav is one downright honest guy and I love that about him. I like how Lavanya is not being bad mouthed just because she was his ex wife and someone who ruled over his heart for a short while! (Now that's really something to dislike! :D) And I guess I can understand why our Khushi darling was in a fix. Out of the blue situations can get totally overwhelming. I'm just glad they love eachother more than their insecurities and have decided to trample the later ones with their love by being together! :D

AWESOME STUFF! :D I JUST LOVED THE WHOLE PACKAGE!
hey you said you were gonna write an OS meanwhile! :(
and when is MKM-2 gonna come up? I'm waiting, so update fast?


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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
I've to say dear you are an amazing writer...

Just three parts and i'm head over herls in love with this version of Arnav Khushi

Can we expect an epilogue please :p

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Beautiful! Totally worth the wait

The way you described Khushi's reaction to his admission was nothing short of perfect.. she has lived in the pits of hopelessness and the pain of unrequited love for so long, and then suddenly she is jerked right out of it.. of course she is overwhelmed and it would take a while for is to seep into her being. 

And Arnav, I am in love with his honesty.. the simple way in which he told her the truth about his life, their life. 

I am glad these two wonderful people have found each other, Arnav gave them a chance rather than brooding over his past... now they will cherish what they share more than ever. Beautiful!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Hey dear thanks for the pm.

I was waiting eagerly for this update. It was beautiful.Clap

I loved the way you have dealt with the entire relationship between Arnav and Khushi. The way Arnav confessed his love, Khushi's inner turmoil of dealing with his confession as the confession came after 15 years of wait, Arnav giving the reason as to why he loves Khushi and lastly Khushi's innocent admission of wanting to be with him in spite of him becoming ugly and penniless. Wow dear I m overwhelmed after reading this update.

I simply have no words to describe this update. You deal with emotions so well. Thumbs UpYou are simply an awesome "ANONYMOUS" writerTongue


As always dear I m always greedy when it comes to your ffs. Wink I always want an "EPILOGUE" wherein I will get to witness how Arnav and Khushi's relationship develops with each other and with their children. Please dear at least once think about my request. I m a loyal fan of your ffs
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
superb :-) the last part was worth waiting.'the silent symphony of their hearts with a little more love' loved it.:-)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Hey !

I found the silent symphony very melodious .  You created an orchestra where words were unspoken but felt,  there was no tug at the string but it created a perfect harmony of music.
   A heart warming story indeed!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
WOW just WOW Clap
Now this is the kind of writing that spells out the word BEAUTIFUL! You are just brilliant in portraying all kinds of emotions, how do you do it!  You should write novels u know!

 This last chapter was handled brilliantly, the way they confessed their feelings, the wording arnav used is just too damn real and beautiful at the same time! *sighs Khushi's reaction to arnav's confession, wonderfully handled! Arnav thinking us two make perfect sense at the right moment was superb. 

And now finally all I can say about these words is "When two people are aware of just each other in a room full of crowd. When two pair of eyes can hold a lengthy conversation. When disagreements are resolved before they disturb the tempo of life. When physical love is a mere extension of trust you have placed in your spouse..."  is PERFECTION! I am not married but I hope this is exactly what a perfect marriage with a perfect partner should entail!

Impressive work yet again!


Edited by Arshix144 - 15 April 2013 at 10:58pm

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