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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 89)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:52pm | IP Logged

This was such a beautiful little story.  I logged in and was soo happy that you updated. Thank you for bringing a smile to my face.

 
 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
Life is so strange; freedom that one can only yearn for renders the imprisoned feeling even more caged when that freedom is finally bestowed. In the same way a beautiful dream that one is sure can never come true, so much so that you build your life around this axiom...only to find one day that dream is a reality. You wrote Khushi's feelings after Arnav told her about his love so beautifully...I can completely empathise with those sentiments!

I am glad Arnav confessed first: it's only fitting I think.

Beautiful short story! 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
beautiful

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Truly enjoyed the update!! Both of them spoke straight from the heart. They balance each other beautifully. 

This was an amazing 3 shot. It's very difficult to capture such an array of emotions with just 3 chapters. 

Great job!!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
simply superb.loved it,

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
That was such a bful part! I lovd it! Arnav's cnfession is breathtaking n khushi's decision of accpting him is so right!
I didnt have much words! M speechless! Faboulous!That was such a bful part! I lovd it! Arnav's cnfession was so cute! Khushi's decision of accpting him was so right! I didnt have much words! I am speechless! Fabolous!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
I really truly am at a loss for words. This was Sooo beautiful. 
All three parts of this were written so flawlessly. You brought out their characters and their feelings so well. And the final part was just the best way to end this. 
Arnav talking with so much feeling and Khushi, in spite of being so much in love with him for so long, didn't just jump at the opportunity of having it reciprocated. She wanted to be sure he was not just saying it because she was his wife... how nicely written...OMG. brought out her insecurity so well. and Arnav's thoughts on her running away, her reactions... bring out his insecurity. 
And they were actually able to tease each other in such an intense situation. I loved every bit of it... 

In such a short chapter, you brought out so much depth and intensity. These 3 chapters could have been a 50 part FF. That is how much I feel like I know this Arnav and Khushi.

And of course, calling Lavanya 'Sugar' ... Loved that little attention to detail! Wink

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
I am unable to get over this paragraph.

Symphony is harmony of the music of life. And a silent symphony is one when two hearts beat in tandem. When two people are aware of just each other in a room full of crowd. When two pair of eyes can hold a lengthy conversation. When disagreements are resolved before they disturb the tempo of life. When physical love is a mere extension of trust you have placed in your spouse. When making love is actually what it spells as, making love. Because you create a little more between yourselves every time. A romantic symphony their lives would be,  Arnav thought, and he will do everything in his power to make sure of it.


I swear i have read it multiple times almost at the verge of mugging it by heart !
I am truly unable to spell out my thoughts on this chapter and this perfectly held together story!
You are simply amazing!
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