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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 76)

ziya-farhannish Senior Member
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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
you have a beautiful way of expressing your story...it is so perfect..every word has its place! but i am not happy with the 'gloomy' khushi, however 'understanding' she may be!

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
just read bith parts as I was on holiday

awesome concept

lived both parts

waiting for next part =)

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
what a lovely symphony... i hope they both realise that they both have fallen in love with each other and are perfect for each other...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
at the end of the day home is where one can repose after a hectic day and that home is not a house but defined by the people in it and these people r those with whom u r comfortable with - not decided by their nature... Big smile

as the saying goes...birds of a feather flock together...so is arnav learning this valuable lesson Embarrassed

great update...thanx for the pm...pls continue soon Clap

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
I read both the parts in one go...brilliant story line...initially I was worried that it is Khushi he is divorcing...the Khushi u presented is moralistic, dreamy, calm, bubbly, matured at the same time...lovely story...can you extend this story...it can make a very good ff...just a suggestion...can you PM me the next update...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
read both parts together Clap

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
great concept and nice story line.
 
However, i wish the story had gone slower. I realize that you want to keep it within 3 chapters, but the way you have written it, it seems a bit rushed. I would encourage exploring this concept at a slower, more defined pace. Right now it is coming across as a narrative, almost as if you are giving a synopsis (or summary) of some story.
 
Sorry if the critique is sounding negative. I have read your work and know that you have the ability to write great story lines... hence the critique on rushed style.

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Eagerly waiting for part3 of TS. I hope you will give a SR which CVs royally spoilt in the show! Wink

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