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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 58)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
awesome update..

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
u shouldnt have made this a three shot..that is the only thing i feel...this story is sooo ful of untold stories that i feel you would do justice only if you write more chapters...keep up the good work..and i dont want to bug you anymore.Smile

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Loved the part ... I too started thinking it's the hospital conversation but glad that you kept in flashback and move to the mrd life.. I was amazed that Arnav longed for a companion and tried everything to make Khusi agree for this proposal and now since they are mrd he started to notice little little things both physically and emotionally in hi lovely wife .
It's like Khusi and Payal's nature are interchanged. Arnav did a lot of comparison between Lavanya and Khusi and i am glad that his self guilt about his failed mrg is reducing say by day.
The last one was really awesome... True and apt difference between Lavanya n Khusi...
Now waiting for one step from Arnav to show how much he loves Khusi... 

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
I love the concept and d narration style too! i always had a problem wid d opposites attract concept most ppl find romantic n passionate... i mean at d end of d day wat abt der life outside d bedroom if dey had nothing in common n were complete polar opposites of each other?? if u put der love life aside two ppl who wish to spend der entire lives wid each other must be atleast comfortable and compatible wid each other in the 1st place. i love khushis character here! its extremely realistic and connectable! a girl need not always be bubbly, carefree and exuberant in an extreme way all d time for her marital life to be passionate n a slow composed and understanding jane can also have love and passion inn her life! 
 i especially love he standing up to dadis tantrums and refusing to be bullied into marriage wid arnav even tho he was her crush for such a long time. It made sense dat she stood up for herself and completely thot thru her actions before she accepted d proposal!Thumbs Up

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
i like the one line with the lake every apt discription nice...

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
I love the way your mind visualizes relationships...and it is very apparent in the 3 stories I have read...including this one.  You etch the characters with such perfect detail and nuances and them let them interact with each other to form a relationship...it is a work of art!!!!!!

Arnav was attracted to Lavanya's vibrant and chirpy personality which was so opposite to his...hoping to fill his life with happiness and it did not...when all along what he needed was hidden behind Khushi's non descriptive outer trappings...

Will Khushi ever believe in the love that he is already Begining to feel?

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
As I started reading the chapter I was very much confused because I was looking forward to the way Anrav would surprise and convince khushi into marrying him. Then as I read on I understood the time that has passed, yet again you have handled it beautifully. I suppose since it is a three shot, there is not enough scope or room to cover the things I was expecting. You have great ideas and I could so imagine this three shot going into a full FF. Then again the beauty of a three shot is that we would get the full story sooner rather than later Smile As I have mentioned it before your treatment of Khushi's character always impresses me it is so unlike the way other writers portray her which always makes me cringe. You make her character strong welled and much more relatable. Hope to read more of your work in the near future!

Edited by Arshix144 - 07 April 2013 at 11:39pm

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
beautiful updste
waiting for next part

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