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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 56)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Nice..
Waiting for part 3

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
It is simply brilliant. I liked quite a few lines and comparisons you made in the update but the last lines take the cake :

Bubbly Lavanya was like a cascading river, who broke the barriers of his heart and made her way inside it and later outside of it at HER own will. Whereas reserved Khushi was like a quite lake which invited him, encouraged him 
to come to itself and let his heart out to her on HIS own.

Opposites attract but if the difference in nature is exactly opposite with no similarity and level of understanding, such kinds of opposite people will not last long in a relationship.




In his three months with Khushi, Arnav realized how much he liked the 'Companionable Silence' between them.

'Companionable Silence' - the word is so deep. A silence which is actually not muted. The people are aware and yet choose to keep silent instead of blabbering on and on. I liked the paragraph where you described how he fell in love with her introvert and silent nature.

Arnav finally came to realise that it was not his sole fault that the marriage did not work out. Earlier he blamed himself and his nature, which is clear from the fact that he warns Khushi again and again about it.

You couldn't have chosen a better title than ' Silent Symphony'
This piece is simply brilliant.




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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Beautiful. Just love this story. Wish this could be longer than 3 updates. This has potential to be a full fledged FF.

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Another nice update from you... So, Arnav has already started to fall for his wife, he had to... I'm liking this TS so much... Waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Superb...
Beautifully written...
Beauty of their relationship is that they have accepted each other
as they are unlike la who was hell bent to change him according to her...
They are truly made for each other...
Love the fact that Arnav is also affected by her...
Pls continue soon...

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Love ur writing style, simply amazingClap. U go so much into the depth of the character, simply fascinating. The way u compared La and Khushi in the end was mind blowing. Overall a perfect update. Hope u dont end it soonSmile
Thanks for this lovely updateSmile

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. 

I loved the way you pen downed Arnav, Khushi & Lavannya's character.

"Khushi probably because she did not want to raise any suspicion on the nature of their relationship from the family."------ waiting for the last part where there will be no 'Wall Of Pillows' between them  & they will  accept each other as real husband & wife.Day Dreaming

Oh my God this is my 1000 post ! Now I am a Goldie DancingParty

Waiting for last update.

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
omg.awesomre...amazing...arnav compared both lavanya and khushi.finally he realized...thanks for pmSmile

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