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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 52)

anusha.nush Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
i love it
somewhere i expected you would have got them married in this update
now what i liked was the fact that they understand each other without the words.
what i adored was arnav feeling himself with khushi and does not feel the need to change himself.
please update soon.

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
That's right Raizada. Best decision ever. I LOVED this bit. The portrayal of Arnav and Khushi's married life is so calm and peaceful and yet, you can sense the beginning of something wonderful. Something permanent.
Their relationship has that stolidity-- almost like a massive oak. That has grown and continues to do so despite all the changes around.
That last metaphor of Khushi being a lake and Lavanya being a river was beautiful and incredibly accurate.
I like how you haven't villainized Lavanya either. Arnav and Lavanya were just two really different people and they couldn't make it work... There was no right or wrong.
And now Khushi is showing that to Arnav. He may not be perfect. But he's perfect for HER.

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
D update ws simply awesum :D
soo..beautifully written ..all d emotions!!
Arnav actually notices hr!! m soo..glad hez happiee with hr!!
khushi still loves him ..<3
im waitin fr d nxt part!!

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mssj Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
I liked the three month time
Gap.

And I it was a nice comparison of
Lavanya and khushi by Arnav.


It feels like love is in the air.


Awesome
Updat. Thank u

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shipraj Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
I feel like i am mesmerised by your writing...how beautifully you portray the emotions...each and every detail of the characters' prospective is amazing...i love that the silence in their relationship is not distance but the peace...i think arnav is falling in love and i hope he confesses soon...i know you have updated this chapter today bt still i will say update soon...

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nightfury Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
loved the explanation given by arnav to khushi
love s all abt accepting ppl how they are isnt it Wink 
don end this pls Confused

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cheriebinny Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Oh just love it

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
Lovely story, as usual. I've said this before, you are a gifted writer. You are amongst those few writers here who truly care about their characters and how their story develops. Keep it up!!


Edited by siamesecat - 07 April 2013 at 9:04pm

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