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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 41)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
such a beautiful part. i like it very much...

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Awesome part
when it started, i thought they were talking over coffee about the marriage, but it was that they were married for the past 3 months
i love how Arnav is loving his companion and the comforting silence they go through
and how he is starting to daze out and stare at her on the sly

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Wow! Simply amazing!

Loved, loved this part dear :) It was so peaceful & tranquil, just like their marriage :)

Again, at first I thought they were discussing their impending marriage over coffee only to realize later on that they were already married :) And they were discussing dadi's Vaishno Devi trip instead...

What a beautiful way to essay how & why they both agreed to the marriage... Arnav making sure she was not saying no b/c of a boyfriend, then questioning his own knowledge about her feelings for her, and reiterating his own shortcomings to her, his quiet & brooding nature, his temper etc. just to make sure Khushi wouldn't be having second thoughts about him later. Poor guy, once bitten twice shy...

I loved the way Khushi was still quite compassionate about his misery. She wanted to reach out & make him feel better in spite of having been ignored for so long. Love is really a strange thing, it can easily forgive the gravest of mistakes in people if one loves them...

I loved the way Arnav kept wondering how he had never noticed Khushi's beauty in all these years, how he had these stereotypical ideas of beauty... Him getting attracted to Khushi was really sweet... Their quiet companionship was really very endearing... Lavanya seems to be a hurricane as compared to Khushi being a calm gentle summer breeze... Now wonder the two never got along... The whole premise of their marriage was wrong, if Lavanya wanted to change Arnav from the get go, where was the love in that relationship, whereas, Khushi accepts & loves Arnav just the way he is...

I really want to read in greater detail of their married life, I seriously wish you could turn your three shot into a SS...

I just loved your last lines,  "Bubbly Lavanya was like a cascading river, who broke the barriers of his heart and made her way inside it and later outside of it at HER own will. Whereas reserved Khushi was like a quite lake which invited him, encouraged him to come to itself and let his heart out to her on HIS own."

Just waiting for that to happen. Please continue soon, & yes, a huge thanks Hug for a quick update this time. Wink


Edited by pixiegirl - 07 April 2013 at 5:08pm

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Amazing part !! Loved the fluidity of the writing !! Ur last para reminded me some lines of Rabindranath Tagore's novel Shesher Kabita which were about Lavanya and Ketki !!

Edited by NicklausBarbie - 07 April 2013 at 2:42pm

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Seethu Goldie
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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:21pm | IP Logged

Part 1:

In the beginning with the description I thought it's Khushi and it could be that they might be separating for many weird reasons but they will in the end find that they are meant to be together but I'm glad it turned out to be Lavanya especially when she is already with NK.
So Khushi had crush on Arnav but still she didn't want to grab the opportunity which presented itself; and that is  in fact reasonable especially when she knows that he is least interested in her.
Garima is being reasonable as well ; she doesnot  want to rule out Dadi but still she wants Khushi to agree whole heartedly.
Just when I thought that it's actually Arnav and Khushi who should be talking about this and he came himself :)
 
Very nice concept and your narration is gripping as always:)
Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
This was absolutley beautiful.
I do not know what it is about this that makes it so besutiful but i jusy LOVE this. You have no idea how many times i have read the first chapter of this.
I love the pace at which this is moving. You have coveree everything so beautifully. I dont know how exactly to describe how beautiful this is.
Its so unique and original which is what makes it all the more amazing.
Please please please dont end this soon. I am begging you. A piece of writing this beautiful deservrs to be longet.

Amazing! Thank you for penning down this amazing piece of work.
God bless,
Jenna

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
so they are married
well it doesnt always have to be opposites that work you know
sometimes people with similar personalities also get along pretty well
hey admit it arnie with khushi you are able to lead your life as you want
you dont have to change yourself too much
though some changes will happen
well their marriage seems to be going well
and slowly but surely they have a cordial relationship with one another
guess the marriage with la was kind of eye opener for him
and he was shocked to see khushi in her bridal dress
so much so they thought it might be some other girl instead of khushi
dude that just goes and tell ya that all that glitters aint gold
so they are getting along fine for the time being
and am sure they will be able to bond more and more with time
cheers for pm

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