Liked it????????????????Well if I'll be truthful with myself, I absolutely loved it (for I cannot find a better word than love at the moment). I really don't know how u do it every single time, but u leave a thorough impression with each of your works... Arnav and Khushi are probably lucky that u took fancy of them and decided to write about the duo (btw, I also agree how can anyone not take fancy of those crazies😆).
Ok so lets take it from the top, I personally had an inkling that it wasn't Arnav and Khushi in the divorce scene, well mostly becoz I can imagine them hating each other, even destroying maybe but never ever DETACHED. And so the moment Arnav just noted that his wife didn't even look at him after divorce, I knew it couldn't be Khushi. (I can probably do my PHD on IPK and believe it or not but my friends are actually suggesting it😉😆)
Now the second thing I loved about your story was how you inverted the entire scenario of what is generally associated with their characters and most importantly what is considered the driving force of their relation. And despite it you remained true to the characters where it actually mattered, for instance, Khushi isn't the kind to give up so easily and with Khushi Arnav is his natural self, he doesn't need to pretend to be something that he is not. So while u inverted the embellishments u still stuck to the roots.👏👏
And lastly I admire your use of language, not a word seems more or less and nothing seems forced... it flows and very gracefully at that😊
Plz do continue this soon, will be desperately waiting😳
Edited by srija.singh04 - 11 years ago
