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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 40)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
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Just loved part 2 more then the first. The flow of the story was wonderful. So much happened and it felt natural, not rushed. 

I love how Arnav is slowly falling in love with his wife & realizing that he can be truly happy in his personal life. 

Looking forward to the last part!


Edited by Nidsubh007 - 08 April 2013 at 1:46am

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
First and foremost i must say this is one story where i can genuinely say i love Dadi for being so stubborn !!
The update started of with them as a couple and for a second i thought did i miss reading something how come they got married also !!ConfusedLOL
But soon enough you went into the flashback !

Loved the way you explained both their point of views with the prospect of them getting married.
It is always said opposites attract but then its definitely not a hard and fast rule and the same is so beautifully expressed in this story.
Arnav thought he chose the best life partner when he married Lavanya , but then he was so engrossed in trying to fill his life with what he thought were his shortcomings he did not see that compatibility and companionship is what will sustain the marriage.
Khushi on the other hand tried to see the positive side to this arranged marriage and give her life a chance to the happiness she so badly craved.

This particular line  written by you is so apt to this whole story! Marvelous writing!

"Bubbly Lavanya was like a cascading river, who broke the barriers of his heart and made her way inside it and later outside of it at HER own will. Whereas reserved Khushi was like a quite lake which invited him, encouraged him to come to itself and let his heart out to her on HIS own."   



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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
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Sorry dear completely forgot about res...

Read both parts and completely loved it. Khushi has a o p,steely different personality in this story and its nice to read something with a different perspective. I liked the way you described Arnav's thoughts when he was thinking and comparing Lavanya with Khushi...it was just awesome. Do update the next part soon


Edited by shaz007 - 08 April 2013 at 10:34pm

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Yaar this update ws Superbb...
I loved ur writing style...different frm others...
Kushi-Arnav's relationship is just perfect...
Indeed its a SILENT HARMONY...
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Edited by kiran1992 - 07 April 2013 at 11:27pm

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
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Firstly really sorry for unres'ing so late.

Secondly..first thought while i started to read was of course- 'cafeteria me bed!'
and after vaishno devi dialogue by Arnav,i had understood they're married now.

The update is kind of peaceful..you know the kind of calm and homely.

Khushi s reflection that her husband is turning absent minded was a total LOL. LOL

Alluring beauty
peeking bare waist
chirpy relatives
companionable silence
calm and peaceful
lovely wife..
Hmm..
Sure,Arnavji..Sure..



m not an ardent follower of opposites attract or any any other for that matter..
companionship,understanding,true love matters to me the most.

M so glad that Arnav realized some things..beauty is not just skin deep..visualising a life partner whom he considers perfect might not turn out so.
And i highly doubt lavanya s love(?) for him..she had set out to change and not like what made him Arnav.
I hope she does'nt give a special appearance in the next one.

But what would have a major appearance?
A Kiss/es.. ;)
Hai na? Hai na?



Edited by Anupama. - 08 April 2013 at 4:48am

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Really nice concept n update.

Love is not to change the person but accepting the person as he/she is. Heart

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
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woOw! THEY FINALLYY GOT MARRIEDD ^_^ ^_^ like i said before *GO DADI GO DADI*LOL kuch toh acha kaam huaBig smile

i understand both their perpectives. Sometimes we tend to think way too much about the advantages of one thing and ignore something that doesn't looks much enticing but when situations cramp up, those not-so-good-looking things way more advantageous than the other oneSmile so i'd say that i've been there and done thatWink

Her accepting him the way he is and him accepting the fact that she has accepting him the way he is sooo *uMMm* sweet? chalega sweet kehna? 'cause i'm out of words reallyEmbarrassed their bond is what i'd say "perfectly companionable" ^_^ 

just waiting for them to declare their love for eachother, ya phir they won't? O.o dekhtay hain what you've in store for usWink

take care and update soOnSmile


I'm really sorry for updating my comment so lateOuch life just takes turns nihayat hi sariyall kisam ke -___-Confused sorryOuch


Edited by smarty94 - 12 April 2013 at 8:42am

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Wonderful writing dear. I like how you are giving Arnav's thoughts on differences between Khushi and Lavanya's persona. Will eagerly wait for your next update!Smile

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