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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 38)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:37am | IP Logged
i should write now a report for my professor but i am sitting infront f my laptop a staring blank on the topic :S


so i just went out to arshi land where i landed here in un TS 

and only can say i made a good desciion because it was super written 


first i thought it was kushi with whom he got divocred but then i thought that not clever 

but like it she loves him since 15 years sweet and he wha a jerk did not do anything 

i would feel the same like kushi and would have ask her mother the same questions so but lets wait for  what arni will tell her :D


update sooon


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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
loved it
a shy and calm Khushi is new to me
at first I thought that you were talking about her until you mentioned Lavania's name
can't wait to read their discussion

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
pleaseee SmileSmileSmile
do continue fast


Edited by ajoop - 07 April 2013 at 9:06am

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
This was indeed quite interesting!

A first I had a thought it was Khushi, but when you mentioned Divorce I knew it couldn't be here.

I love the little and big twists you always add to your stories! There are amazing! :)

I like how Khushi is standing up for herself and not just giving in like that!

Can't wait for the next part! :D

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Loved this first part to your TS!

Love how you have described Arnav's PoV.

His feelings for Lavanya. How she loved him for what she wanted him to become and not for who she was. 

Brilliantly done! Loved it..

I can relate to Khushi's POV.

Unrequited love is the hardest to bear. It's worse when the other person knows about it, but doesn't even bother to acknowledge it.

Khushi's thoughts about herself. The way she has gone about trying to keep it to herself to hoping he will notice to understanding why he was drawn to Lavanya. 

How she has compared herself to Lavanya. The pillow being the only witness to her crush, the maturation from crush to love and most of all her tears.

I loved how you have described the emotions during the conversation. I understand Shashi's reasoning, but he should consider Khushi's needs and wants too.

You can see Garima understanding her daughter's hesitancy as Khushi struggles to not allow herself to break down. 

Wonder what Arnav is gonna say..

Can't wait to read more.. 

I love this more than I can tell or express. 

You should definitely continue..

Please update soon..
Waiting!!

Also, this is one of your best pieces, yet!
Thanks for the PM..

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Superbbb start... Clap

When u started I thought it ws Khushi...coz d qualities u described ws apt 4 Kkg...
Bt when d divorce part came...I knew that it ws nt Khushi...
I didn't expect hr 2 b in love wth Arnav already...That ws a surprise 4 me...
Anyway lookn 4ward 2 read more


~KIRAN~

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
i really really really wanna read more
for ths first time khushi is a different character
but is she really not beautiful?
anyways i loved the first chapter
update soon

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Its amazing concept...love it
initially I thought It was Arnav-Khusi but you brought a twist right in the beginningSmile
Love how you describe this Khusi who has had a crush on Arnav since she was 11..Awww!!!
But also love the fact that this khusi has self respect...
would request to make it a full fleged SS/FF..

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