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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 2)

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
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That was a FABULOUS beginning. I love how you've painted Khushi as reclusive and reticent here as opposed to her usual cheery self. She is withdrawn and shy yet she has a streak of maturity, of strength and self respect which makes her very likeable.

Arnav's fears and desires on the other hand are so very real. It would be so natural for someone like him to be attracted to someone far removed from him like Lavanya.

Yet, I can already sense how well they would suit each other if they'd only give their relationship a chance!

I could feel Khushi's hurt so well. Unrequited love is indeed a bitch and when you've been holding on to it for so long, it becomes a part of you. They need to heal each other's pain and insecurities. And I know they can-- if only they don't let egos and false pride come in the way.
But over here, I sense that it's not false pride. It's genuine hopelessness and cynicism.

I'm so glad that you wrote this!


Edited by Semanti - 05 April 2013 at 11:57pm

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
The beginning took me a little by surprise! But overall I am liking this concept!

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Loved this TS..make this a ff pls :)

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Loved it. The concept of terming your first love as just a silly crush is so universal. We fall for someone who doesn't fall for us and then to console our heart we term the feelings as a stupid crush. I liked Khushi's self respecting nature, though she loves Arnav but she doesn't jump at the first opportunity to marry him. Also she gives her parents a go ahead to find a suitable match for her. I loved her strong character.
Please continue soon !!

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
awesome concept...
continue soon

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
very interesting waiting for the next update

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
superb... loved it
so now arnav is a divorcee.. and khushi had a crush on him a long time ago..
and now his dadi proposed her to marry him... oh uh
continue soon

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 12:01am | IP Logged
so he was married to lavanya ... now arnav is a divorcee..let see what happen next..lovely...


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