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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 130)

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Posted: 30 May 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
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so finally he confessed...awee the 12 am romance...arnav kitna bola last update :p bt we lovd it...khusi waitd 15 yrs and her wait finaly gotten over...superb ending with arnav promisng to make her lyf beautiful...plz add me to ur buddy list...and do pm me ur future works...god bless u

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Posted: 30 May 2013 at 2:25am | IP Logged
awesome one

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Posted: 30 May 2013 at 7:30pm | IP Logged

read this story accidentally when browsing the forum, liked it so far

 
Swapna
 

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Posted: 30 May 2013 at 8:03pm | IP Logged

Thumbs UpHugwish there was more story.

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged
That was beautiful,dear.. Loved it!!

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Posted: 04 June 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Fabulous i loved it sooo much 
Such a wonderful emotional ts 

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Posted: 05 June 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
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I actually thought it was Khushi at the start of the story. But it turned out to be Lavanya who Arnav was getting a divorce from. And for the first time ever, any author made me wonder this about the natural make up of Arnav and Khushi... Wouldnt Khushi's over the top cheerfulness and her constant chatter start grating on Arnav's ears after getting married to her and living with her 24/7??? Dunno...
 
Coming to your story, it was beautiful.
 
Arnav, a man looking for companionship and love in his lonely life, but looking at illusions, accepting facades, wanting a glorified image... all were his misunderstood thoughts.
 
Khushi on the other hand knew exactly what and whom she wanted. But the said man didnt want her. And she surprised me with Arnav. Just because she loves him, doesnt mean she should get into a loveless compromise.
 
I liked it that Arnav and Khushi talked it out. Placed their arguments and gave each other a chance.
 
You took me by surprise at the start of the second update too. They were already married and the companionship was there to see, the peace was there to feel, the calm was there to absorb and the happiness though veiled was bursting to come out in the open.
 
Arnav found in Khushi a beautiful bride and a considerate wife and Khushi found in Arnav just what she had always dreamt of. Yet, the distance is there. When you marry for others, are unsure of your standing in a relationship, when words are not yet spoken, coming closer takes time.
 
This you covered in the third update without including any twist. It was their 6 months' anniversary and it was a time as good as any for Arnav to claim her as his wife.
 
He holds her close, intimately as is a right of a husband and declares his love for her. When you want something for long, really long and then you get it, you really go numb. I can so understand Khushi.
 
Then came not just the declaration of love but the explanation too. Arnav realised he loves Khushi when he missed her terribly. Khushi realised she loved Arnav (and no more crushed after him) was when she realised his looks and money didnt matter. Only he did. PERFECT. BEAUTIFUL.
 
And they claimed their rights on each other in a not so silent symphony... Embarrassed. They are happy. I am happy.
 
I wish I could find a silent symphony. I find too many words and constant utterance of belonging suffocating...
 
I also wish you would write more of such short stories. Smile


Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 05 June 2013 at 9:48pm

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Posted: 05 June 2013 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
It was amazing!
So beautifully explained!!!
I really felt the silence yet there were words communicated...still talking...
The feelings...the change...i just adore the way you bring life to those words!
Mindblowing!!!

PS: err...  i just wanted to ask whether you are much of a silence person...Pardon my out of the blue question...


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